Writers who've rewritten an entire novel from scratch, what are the best way to do so?
I wrote a dystopian/speculative fiction novel last year and submitted it to some competitions, but It didn't stick anywhere, perhaps because it was bleak and tough to read (hell, there were lengthy footnotes ever 3 pages). In hindsight I did not make it easy for the judges. A writing mentor of mine suggested rewriting parts, in not all of the book (for example changing it from 95% first person, to roughly 20%), changing the tone from dense and serious to light and funny. And I feel like those changes could make the "medicine", which I believe would benefit being spread into the world at this historical juncture, more palatable. Writers out there who've managed to accomplish a similar feat, what's the best way to go about starting?