Hello there,
It's almost a year since I started writing and posting, and I'd love to hear your thoughts as fellow writers.
Have I improved? Or did it only get worse? Honestly, considering the comment draughts on both Ao3 and FFN I seriously have no idea.
If you don't mind a longfic that is still being actively written and enjoy reading fics from Naruto fandom, feel free to read on FFN or Ao3
No idea if I should have the Writing Help or Self Promo flair here... so just to be safe I'm leaving the Self promo tag on.
I want to see if my writing improve since I started almost a year ago. And what better to use as metric as the fic I still work on and still update weekly. So if you can trudge through almost 150k words, I'd very much like to hear your opinions.
Synopsis is as such: A man dies and gets yeeted into Naruto world as Sakura's older brother. But the world is different than the one he knows so well. The cahracters are mostly similar enough in personality, but the differences compounf fast. He realizes he needs to become strong to save this world and goes on to fuck up repeatedly.
The story starts from his death and continues to him being born again, his childhood and his early life. Right now he is helping out the Kiri Rebels in their war against Yagura.
No Sharingan or Mokuton... No system either. He got to pick what parts of Ninja arts he will be talented in and Crystal Release. Rest his on his autistic tendency to become strong.