Looking for feedback on mostly characterization/character voice and plot, if I'm allowed to get picky, haha - but I'll take anything!
First Two Chapters on Google Docs !
Here's a little synopsis to give you a feel for it:
This is a story of guilt, grief, and duty in a society where those Anointed with superhuman abilities are considered dangerous before anything else.
Felix uses his invisibility to steal from the wealthy to pay off the ever-growing debt to the cartel. At the scene of each crime, he leaves encoded messages for his mother to decrypt from prison.
Under the alias Cyanix, Simon fights crime to protect the city of New Seattle when he’s not interning with the world-renowned biomedical engineer Dr. Owen Augustus. Simon relentlessly attempts to solve the mystery of the Nocturne Cypher in hopes that he can prove to the world (and himself) that he really can be a hero.
Simon and Felix’s stories intertwine as the cartel and new-to-town crime syndicate battle it out for a mysterious substance rumored to kill anyone without Anointed powers.