I've got a Novella in the works at the moment and was wondering if I'm doing a good job with the blurb so far.
Here's what I got:
Andrew's father was taken from him by a Dragon when he was twelve.
Twelve years later, he returns home to his hometown of Knight's Hallow after dropping out of college. He has spent years convincing himself that what he saw wasn't real, yet when a young couple is attacked at a local make-out point, Andrew quickly learns that his childhood fantasy was more real than he could ever imagine.
I like it, but something feels off. Maybe it's because I don't fully establish the main premise of the series, although that's on purpose as saying what he discovers would spoil some of the bigger revelations.
I do manage to establish Dragons in the modern day (something I don't see very often), although Idk if it was clear that this takes place in mordern day.
Thoughts?