u/Electrical-Rip-6379

I struggled for a really long time with the lyrics to this song. I kinda boxed myself into a corner with the formula. Wrote several different versions. This is what I've got so far but it's not necessarily the finished product. Could definitely tweak the wording here and there or even write new verses. Any thoughts? Which of the 5 verses could be improved, or which of the 5 just needs to go? How many verses does it need? Does it need anything else?

Thanks for listening! Peace.