u/Desperate-Ad-9480

Well, my question is exactly what the title says.

I've been working on two fantasy stories and trying to build a chapter backlog before I start posting them.

However, one of these stories starts as a slice of life before evolving into epic fantasy - kinda like Mushoku Tensei and Name of the Wind -, and working on its slower initial arc led me to question if its pacing at the start would be a hindrance for it gaining visibility on Royal Road, a platform that is known for its fast paced series.

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u/Desperate-Ad-9480 — 10 days ago

Hey guys, how are you doing?

I'm working on this idea for a fantasy story, and woul appreciate some feedback.

Do the specific concepts and terminology make it intriguing, confusing or neither one? Does this chapter make you want to read the rest? Is the prose ok? Any insights are welcome!

Link for google docs: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vXFVuNNSCYrJ8jBQEX3WpHEpz73nVCEz/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=108272849487390311977&rtpof=true&sd=true

u/Desperate-Ad-9480 — 18 days ago