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Blaming Capitalism For Seemingly Illogical Worldbuilding Is Super Easy, Barely An Inconvenience
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Blaming Capitalism For Seemingly Illogical Worldbuilding Is Super Easy, Barely An Inconvenience

Also ignore the fact I misspelled "existence" I promise I'm a good writer okay

u/DanielGoldhorn — 2 days ago

[Complete] [76,537] [YA Science-Fiction Drama] Renderville: "Who Framed Roger Rabbit" Meets "Parasite"

BLURB:

Renderville takes place in a world where cartoons all live in a giant computer server. The iconic stars pay their way through merchandise sales and branding deals; if you're a background character, you have to get a real job when your movie's done.

Cal was one such man, poofed into existence along with his wife and son to be a gag character for a new adaptation of "Chicken Little." The movie flops, but Cal unexpectedly becomes popular online and is catapulted into the social elite. So he has to navigate his life turning upside-down, and trying to build a relationship with his wife and son. They were literally made to be together so it should be easy... right?

Feedback I'm Looking For:

  • Overall opinion on the story, obviously
  • Your opinions on Cal, Sofie, Ferdinand, Nyx, and Rover, the five primary characters
  • Was there anything you feel like was missing?
  • What would you say the theme of the story is?
  • Does anything feel too spelled-out or obvious?
  • What do you think of the romantic aspects of the book?

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u/DanielGoldhorn — 2 days ago