u/Correct-Shoulder-147

The job was simple: take the data, make the drop, collect the money, and get the girl.

But when the clinic gets hit, the broker dies, and the route burns behind him, Felix has one night to cross Neu Berlin’s undercity before the package leaks and cooks his brain from the inside.

Hunted by a corporate recovery team, revolutionaries, and the Mob, can Felix survive or will he end up as just another body on the streets of Neu Berlin?

My specific hope for a Beta Reader is:
The love interest is a trans woman. I would like to find someone from this community to tell me whether I have written this character well or not.

It's clean, with no spice.
has been edited, and should otherwise be ready to publish

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u/Correct-Shoulder-147 — 7 days ago