u/Conscious_Froyo_1778

Logline: In a walled city where the word "curiosity" has been banned for sixty years, a restless young mill worker named Tindru discovers a hidden archive of forbidden knowledge and leads a revolution that topples the regime. But when his liberated city descends into fatal chaos—and when the woman he loves is trampled by the freedom he unleashed—Tindru does what no revolutionary expects. To restore order, he becomes the suppressor. He signs laws restricting education, silencing dissent, and banning the very word he once risked everything to restore. The title card reveals the final irony: the word "curiosity" was suppressed in Year 1 by the old regime. It was suppressed again in Year 61. The name of the man who suppressed it the second time was Tindru.

I just wanted opinion on this piece I have working on. Would this work or not? It 77 pages rn but i am some part that i wanted to

Timeline is too small it can be widen for better and smooth flow there are many aspect which are not still address in this PDF. If you have any Suggestions that you want comment down below. Note this is not a Government Led Report Just some random skibble that I did for time pass while discussing with AI.