u/Competitive_Bath9023

Hi r/BetaReaders,

I'm looking for 3-4 beta readers for my completed contemporary romance novel, Still.

The basics: 73,000 words | Complete | Contemporary romance with explicit content

The pitch: First-person male POV contemporary romance set in Glasgow. Zeke is a UX designer who thinks analytically about most things, including — eventually — the product manager he starts working with and can't stop thinking about.

Slow burn. Explicit content from around the midpoint. Power exchange elements later in the book.

Comparable titles: Sits somewhere between Normal People and contemporary romance — character-driven, voice-led, more literary in register than most genre romance.

What I'm looking for: I'm not after line edits — the manuscript has been through a thorough editorial pass. I'm looking for reader experience feedback specifically:

  • Did the pacing work for you as a reader coming in cold?
  • Did Zeke's voice feel consistent and believable throughout?
  • Did the relationship feel earned?
  • Was there anywhere you put it down or lost interest?
  • How did the ending land?

Please note: the book contains explicit sexual content including power exchange elements. Please only volunteer if you're comfortable reading this.

Timeline: Looking for feedback in 4-6 weeks. Please only volunteer if this is realistic for you.

I can do a swap if you have something in a similar genre, but it's not required.

DM me if you're interested and I'll send the manuscript as a PDF or Word doc — whichever you prefer.

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u/Competitive_Bath9023 — 14 days ago