u/Comet439

fire pit - a poem about the impermanence of friendship and time

This is one of my first poems. I’ve been thinking a lot about the impermanence of time and trying to find meaning in today when tomorrow isn’t guaranteed.

I hope you enjoy it and if you have any feedback, please pass them along!

fire pit

the North Star guides
our trek down a path
to a clearing only we know
an ash pit taking centre stage

one hauls the wood
another gathers kindling
she prepares the lawn chairs
and I get the match

smoke twists through the branches
and fire flickers red
and before long
everything returns
as if no time had passed

stories are shared
followed by giddy jests
with the kind of laughter
that leaves your stomach sore

as the fire dies down
belongings are packed
and no trace is left
of secrets now shared

and since then
the path overgrew
but I still remember
the North Star above us
and wonder when
the fire pit will greet us again

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u/Comet439 — 3 days ago

ramen

New poetry writer here. I’ve been stuck in a bit of a rut lately with the concept that tomorrow isn’t guaranteed and to capture the significance in the now.

This poem is about the first time I met my now husband. A glimpse of an inward train wreck while waiting for him to arrive.

Happy to know your thoughts. I don’t know if this is ‘good’ or not but I’m really curious to see if anyone has had this feeling too.

Anyways I hope you enjoy as much as I did writing it

u/Comet439 — 6 days ago