u/Cleb3D

▲ 1 r/acting

Audition Feedback Request

I wish I had a video to show you guys. I'd appreciate feedback on my acting in the attached audio based on the below script. It's for an audition for a (guess which) play.

"We’re wasting time.

It’s your turn.

All right. I had a particular feeling about this trial. Somehow I felt that the defense counsel never really conducted a thorough cross-examination Too many questions were left unasked.

While it doesn’t change my opinion about the guilt of the kid, still, I agree with you that the defense counsel was bad.

So-o-o-o?

I kept putting myself in the boy’s place. I would have asked for another lawyer, I think. I mean, if I was on a trial for my life, I’d want my lawyer to tear the prosecution to shreds, or at least try. Look, there was one alleged eyewitness to the killing. Someone else claims he heard the killing and then saw the boy run out afterwards. There was a lot of circumstantial evidence, but actually… those two witnesses were the entire case for the prosecution… Supposing they were wrong?

What do you mean, “Supposing they were wrong?” What’s the point of having witnesses at all?

Could they be wrong?

They sat on the stand under oath. What are you trying to say?

They’re only people. People make mistakes. Could they be wrong?

I… no! I don’t think so.

Do you know so?

Well, now, listen, nobody can know a thing like that. This isn’t an exact science.

That’s right, it isn’t."

Audio for feedback

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u/Cleb3D — 2 days ago
▲ 3 r/Dance

Learning to Moonwalk, Specific Question

I’m currently teaching myself to moonwalk (trend follower ahh) with basically zero dancing experience (but I have a good sense of movement from fencing and animation), and I have a question about how I should do it (might add more with an edit if I have any); should I keep my weight somewhat on the balls of my feet the whole time, even when my back foot is sliding with barely any weight, or should the sliding foot have absolutely zero weight? I’m trying to make sure that I don’t put much weight on it, and I want to make sure my foot drops all the way down, but at the same time I want to be able to transition into the front foot smoothly. General advice is also kinda useful, but I feel like I can mostly get there by watching self-recordings and comparing that to reference, it’s mostly tiny mechanical details that are difficult to figure out myself.

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u/Cleb3D — 4 days ago