u/Born_Feeling3125

River of unhappiness

The last time I saw you, your eyes told me oh, it told me stories It whispered secrets, your secrets

As they dart about from left to right, up to down They spoke, I saw them

I saw you

They often landed on mind From one eye to the next

My nose

And at last at rest at my lips

They linger there, they ponder

Stagnant. Stillness

Longing

Emptiness

They analyse every indentation, every crease and every line Hesitation, confusion

Inclination

They trace back up to my eyes

Yours met mine

But you closed them and turned away and walked,

You walked away

(Feel free to give feedback, it was inspired but the movie call me by your name)

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u/Born_Feeling3125 — 23 hours ago

River of unhappiness

The last time I saw you, your eyes told me oh, it told me stories It whispered secrets, your secrets

As they dart about from left to right, up to down They spoke, I saw them

I saw you

They often landed on mind From one eye to the next

My nose

And at last at rest at my lips

They linger there, they ponder

Stagnant. Stillness

Longing

Emptiness

They analyse every indentation, every crease and every line Hesitation, confusion

Inclination

They trace back up to my eyes

Yours met mine

But you closed them and turned away and walked,

You walked away

(Feel free to give feedback, it was inspired but the movie call me by your name)

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u/Born_Feeling3125 — 23 hours ago

River of unhappiness

The last time I saw you, your eyes told me oh, it told me stories It whispered secrets, your secrets

As they dart about from left to right, up to down They spoke, I saw them

I saw you

They often landed on mind From one eye to the next

My nose

And at last at rest at my lips

They linger there, they ponder

Stagnant. Stillness

Longing

Emptiness

They analyse every indentation, every crease and every line Hesitation, confusion

Inclination

They trace back up to my eyes

Yours met mine

But you closed them and turned away and walked,

You walked away

(Feel free to give feedback,it was inspired by the movie call me by your name)

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u/Born_Feeling3125 — 23 hours ago

A poem I wrote

My heart will never beat the same

Not after the day your body vanished

Gone without a trace

Disintegrated into nothingness

Ashes

Nothing but ashes

Dark, cold, obscure ashes

Compacted and confined

The day our souls collided and yours found a place in my heart was the day the mere vessel that held you up was gone

Gone but not forgotten

Gone but finally free

Free and forever apart of me

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u/Born_Feeling3125 — 2 days ago

If Walls Could Talk

If walls could talk, it will reveal much more than the lips could ever tell

More than the heart could confess

Palpably more than the brain could comprehend

Within it's stillness lays the chaos

Behind the layers rest the words that were never told to another

The words that never made it on a page

The chapters unwritten deep in its core

Buried in its frame

If walls could talk, they wouldn't

They would stay silence

Within its nature

Stillness, stoic

Because it will know that if you wanted them to know

They would have known

(feel free to give feedback)

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u/Born_Feeling3125 — 2 days ago