u/Bookworm7180

Like for example have there be different POVS like Reyna’s or even Octavian of all people.

Like changing the character perspectives or adding new ones or have a different character’s perspective during a scene like for example having Jason have a POV instead of Leo when meeting and talking to Thalia.

What I would change is for Jason to have a POV instead of Leo when talking to Thalia. The next thing I would do is add Annabeth’s POV sprinkled out throughout the book on her search for Percy.

Now that I’m thinking about it for when Leo, Jason, Piper, and Hedge get separated from Thalia and the Hunters I’ll instead have Thalia come with them to Aeolus and for the rest of the book.

I’ll try to make a post everyday for like the rest of may. Like for tomorrow I’ll ask about a rewrite for The Sea of Monsters and so on…