Feedback for a character
After being on the sub for a couple, days I decided to post an idea I’ve had for a bit.
Jackson Emmett or Jackie for short has been your average high school sophomore. This would change as while on a school trip to a research lab, an explosion launched irradiated shrapnel onto him. While the shrapnel was removed and his body showed no signs of radiation, the incident had granted him the power to transform parts or even his whole body into metal. He’s able to reshape and solidify his form at will allowing him to create tools such as springs, hammers, shields and more as long as he can imagine it. He’s also able to manipulate metal objects through physical contact.
With these new found powers , Jackie decided to further investigate the incident that granted him powers by becoming the masked hero Ferrocious. As he digs deeper , he’ll discover that his city has its fair share of skeletons buried underneath and that the explosion may have been on purpose.
So what do you think, leave any feedback in the comment section.