>Your sister is missing. She came to these woods chasing rumors of a village that disappeared, an ancient curse, and a single name at the heart of it all: Elias Grene. Will you find her before the curse finds you?
Hey everyone,
First time posting here! I’m working on a branching narrative horror game called Whispers of the Wendigo, and I’m looking for feedback from people who enjoy interactive fiction, choice-driven stories, and horror.
It’s a free downloadable Windows prototype on itch.io. Just download the ZIP, unzip it, and run the .exe. No installation required.
This is still an early prototype. It does not have final artwork, music, sound, or full UI polish yet. The main thing I’m testing right now is whether the structure works as an interactive story.
The build includes:
- branching choices
- hidden/optional story details
- timed decisions during pressure moments
- failure states
- chase sequences
- multiple outcomes
I’d love feedback on:
- Is the story is clear?
- Are the choices feel meaningful?
- Does the pacing work?
- Do the timed choices feel fair?
- Do any routes or transitions feel confusing?
- Does the horror/tension comes through with the current presentation?
- Does the game feel worth replaying?
Game page:
https://bwadd.itch.io/whispers-of-the-wendigo
Feedback form:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSeZZQdj9-eJ3H1gZcz_Rr1rlkF-I4ryosSOvHvbJ-ZRKycvVA/viewform?usp=header
Thanks for checking it out. I’m especially interested in feedback on the writing, choice structure, and pacing.
