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[Critique] ?Speculative fiction. 1700 words.
Looking for some feedback on the first few pages, with attention focused on the narrative style and voice. And whether or not you hate it. Thanks!
u/B1ueberry — 1 day ago
u/B1ueberry
Looking for some feedback on the first few pages, with attention focused on the narrative style and voice. And whether or not you hate it. Thanks!