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I think I am having problems with how I want to write my Izuku

For context Izuku lost both his parents in a villain attack and spend 3 (Bad) months in a orphanage until his grandpa got custody and spend a few years with him until at nine his grandpa died. He later became homeless and learn he got a quirk until the events of The sludge villain and All might becomes his guardian for PLOT

Oh he doesn’t know Bakugo and he might have done like 40 accidental cásese of vigilantism. But he isn’t a vigilante he just helped people with his quirk

Oh and he doesn’t get OFA
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I know I want him to not be a bit confident on his actions but not with people like canon. Not as much anxiety

I know he doesn’t see that he has a family since his last one died, and he doesn’t want people to be alone?

Maybe a bit of anger but very suppress

Any suggestions

I need help, Opinion or tips on the dialogue. This is a small part of the first draft of a chapter of a fic I am writing. I having a bit of problems with writing this specific dialogue of this scene.

Context It’s after Izuku helped with the sludge villain by using his quirk and Mirio will get Ofa and Izuku doesn’t know that

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Izuku was nervous. Recovery girl was finished with his check ups, she told him what he already knew. He is slightly malnourished, and was loopy from quirk exhaustion.

Well thats better than Izuku over using his quirk, he really didn’t have many stuff left of his grandpa.

But now All Might was coming to tell him what he his fate would be. Izuku know what all Might promised, but he knows either option for him are being put in a foster home or worst jail.

But Izuku couldn’t really push himself to regret if. So here he was waiting for his fate.

He looked up when he heard the door open to reveal All Might is his small form, next to him Nezu. The man in a brown hat and blond kid from the beach? and Sir nighteye

Izuku swayed as he stood up “I am sorry!” But hey tried to bow

“What did I tell you about taking it slow!” Recovery girl yelled at him but kept him from falling as she grabbed on

They looked a bit suprise day his apology. “Why are you apologizing?” Sir Nighteye asked in a clear tone looking at him

“I almost hurt you and I saw All Might transform! If I didn’t topple the garbage by accident nothing would have happened!”

The blond guy stepped up and asked “Hey it’s alright, it’s not your fault” he smiled brightly at him

“But I could have hurt Sir Nighteye! If I was more carful or just st-“

All Might asks “Did you mean to topple the trash?”

“Wh- NO!!”

“Than it was a mistake” Nighteye states “I accept your apology. Just don’t drop any more trash on me” The suited hero states. Izuku is coming to terms with that

Nezu pipes up “Well it was nice apology, but we have some matters of yours we wish to speak to you about”

The greenet straightens in his seat

I just finished reading incident at internship

Basically I been writing a Fic that Izuku can use toku toys to transform into Sentai members or riders

I need a six ranger for him to turn into preferably that has a sentai key

He needs to be something his other forms can’t do like no, go on flyers since Inui brother (pink donbrother) can fly, so its own neash

and no repeating colors (winks) like no mighty morphing green ranger because I have Gokai green

Here’s the current roster I have for Izuku

Lupen red- hacks and tricks*** ***( hard on battery when using hacks)

Go on Yellow-speed (medium on battery)

Pink don brother- flight ( medium on battery)

Gokai green - base ( easy on battery)

Buster blue - strength (easy on battery)

Shiken red- sword (wink spoilers) oh sword play

(I was thinking a ranger who uses long range)

So context is I am writing a crossover fic where Katsuki was young and everyone was stronger than him because he was a young kid (like ten) and his group of friends are basically were stronger than him because there powers aren’t quirks and we’re busted in a way

And he learn to move pass the ego and was team player. Now that he has grown up and goes to Ua with a “Powerful” Izuku what does he do?

I don’t want him to be the normal Katsuki, more like screams season 6 Katsuki at the start of this fic. It’s because stuff happen to him and he learn to be hero from that

I have idea of him being the “Dad” of the group in the sense of “don’t do that, thats stupid” not the “brush your teeth and come here cry on my shoulder”

I want him to try to protect his friends because now he can stand beside them