
u/Ashamed_Ad_1837

Huge fan of BH's tutorials, but I personally found the portrait retouching tutorial flattening, giving it an artificial look. I personally have a quite conservative philosophy about the extent of post-processing, but notwithstanding, his final images always looked much better what he starts out with. I can't even say the same about these, they look brighter sure, but devoid of character. Did anyone feel the same? Also, those working in editorial/fashion industry, is this common after every shoot, this level of micro-editing? Most of them do not have this artificial look, at least.
Here's my crit: Productive Recovery [2735]
I have been writing short stories since a couple of years, and I take a lot of time writing each one. I make my friends read them, and they seem to like them, more or less. But objectively I would like to know where do they stand, from seasoned readers who read a lot.
- Did the story hold you till the end?
- Quality of prose? Is it more often dense than what would make for a smooth reading experience?
- How do you rate it overall?
- Any specific feedback for the story or the writer?
Here's the story: The Three Act Story [2226]
Feel free to be as long and critical as you like.
I can see shutter drag, but what is the lighting setup for the negative space? Is it done in post?
How do you like the photo, is it overdone? Any specific feedback or avenues I should try?
Need a pair of fresh eyes. Does it look fake after? How do you rate it in general?