u/Artbohr

I put the good part upfront and then tried to introduce more clarity about the game, like what we actually do in it. I started by showing the Fire already in an advanced state: bigger, and communicating with us. I also reduced how many times the skill tree appears, showing it in full instead of repeatedly showing the upgrade process. Also zoomed in at the beginning so the flame is more readable. Here's the previous post, if you want to check it out.

In case you're interested in the game, here's the link:
https://store.steampowered.com/app/4512580/The_Fire_Must_Be_Fed