u/Agreeable_One284

▲ 4 r/Guitar

I’ve been playing the guitar for almost 3 months, the first 2 were on acoustic and I decided to write down an idea I had. A song called corruption. I decided it would be smart to post a video of me clearly playing so I can get tips on how do to stuff better in the comments. Feel free to give me your most honest opinion. I’m definitely not gonna get mad!

u/Agreeable_One284 — 7 days ago
▲ 2 r/guitarplaying+1 crossposts

If you are reading this, thanks a lot! I’ve been playing the guitar for about 2 months and a half, the first 2 being on an acoustic so I’m not that good and also I’ve written this in like 2 hours so it’s not great.I have tons of ideas but I can only recreate on the guitar the easier ones. I posted this because I want to know if it’s got any kind of melodic structure or if it’s just some stupid doodling. I accept any kind of feedback, I’m here to improve. I tried to give this song a sort of corrupted feel, like a beautiful melody and then transformed into metal… don’t hold back on the criticism!

u/Agreeable_One284 — 9 days ago