u/AggravatingNail6061

Hi again o/

More prompt work taken from my Substack published today, am considering pushing to Lit Magazine submission with this one.

Prompt was write a scene from three separate PoV's and was constrained by a word count.

Apart from general feedback (which is all loved) any thoughts on voice differentiation through prose on the three PoV's would be great I am out of my comfort zone here and had to try figure out how to get it rendered. Self assessment is really hard with this one. Pacing and narrative economy are other areas that a second/third/X pair of eyes are would be fantastic I've been working hard with subtractive styles so interested to see if that's paying off.

Otherwise, have a great weekend everyone \o/

Hi everyone, this is a personal essay I published about a week ago and whilst the feedback has been positive on Substack It's not really given me a chance to reflect/grow from it. I'm happy with the piece but I'd like some other eyes/views on it.

Aside from general critiques/thoughts any points of development on voice would be fantastic, I've not been doing structured writing like this for long (November last year) so always looking to push the boundary's of what I'm capable of.

If it sucks, let me know where so I can stare are it :3