Would you keep reading? (2000 Words)
Hi, I'm a fifteen-year-old writer working on a book. I simply wanted feedback on either the book or my writing in general (no matter how harsh it is), as I do wish to take writing seriously. I'm curious to see if the book hooks you in or immerses you, and how well it does either.
Thank you
u/Affectionate_Eye4030 — 1 day ago