▲ 1 r/writingfeedbackEpistolary style novel intro. Worried that it's doing too much too early. Thoughts?https://preview.redd.it/lp97hgxmjyzg1.png?width=1602&format=png&auto=webp&s=e3af80a44068cba0faf0329f0cd6de5539cdd8eb https://preview.redd.it/wtckeslojyzg1.png?width=1510&format=png&auto=webp&s=1292856442254fcfa735005aa2847ebd87c8c54a https://preview.redd.it/75j5of8pjyzg1.png?width=1509&format=png&auto=webp&s=7716955a793b73d5fdfda235a70e4529f51d07bd reddit.com u/Active_General1064 — 6 days ago
