Looking For Feedback On The Opening Chapter Of My Low Fantasy Novel
Hey all. Been working on the first draft of my first low fantasy novel and wanted to get some outside eyes on Chapter 1 before I continue.
Main things I’m wondering:
Does the voice/dialect stay readable?
Does the world feel interesting without being confusing?
Did the opening hook you enough to keep reading?
u/Accurate_Video_4900 — 6 days ago