
The author's story is good , but I'm initial chapter it's so confusing and the recent chapter is mindf*ck

The author's story is good , but I'm initial chapter it's so confusing and the recent chapter is mindf*ck
Actually I'm writing a novel and just completed 6 chapters but no one is supporting me , 0 supporters 😔
I think my story isn't that good
Here is the elevator pitch
A boy is reborn again and again in a world that never truly changes. In every life, he recovers most of his past memories—but never all of them. Just before he can uncover the truth, he dies… every time.
Haunted by fragments of lives where he was someone else, and watched by a mysterious girl who may be controlling everything, he begins to question reality itself—is this a simulation, a battlefield, or something far worse?
This time, with incomplete memories and time running out, he must uncover the truth before the cycle resets again… or accept that he was never meant to remember everything.
Do you think too ??
Here is the link
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-last-reset-end-of-the-loop\_35732387500401605
Actually I'm writing a novel and just completed 6 chapters
Here is the elevator pitch
A boy is reborn again and again in a world that never truly changes. In every life, he recovers most of his past memories—but never all of them. Just before he can uncover the truth, he dies… every time.
Haunted by fragments of lives where he was someone else, and watched by a mysterious girl who may be controlling everything, he begins to question reality itself—is this a simulation, a battlefield, or something far worse?
This time, with incomplete memories and time running out, he must uncover the truth before the cycle resets again… or accept that he was never meant to remember everything.
Do you think too ??
Here is the link
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-last-reset-end-of-the-loop\_35732387500401605
Actually I'm writing a novel and just completed 6 chapters but no one is supporting me , 0 supporters 😔
I think my story isn't that good
Here is the elevator pitch
A boy is reborn again and again in a world that never truly changes. In every life, he recovers most of his past memories—but never all of them. Just before he can uncover the truth, he dies… every time.
Haunted by fragments of lives where he was someone else, and watched by a mysterious girl who may be controlling everything, he begins to question reality itself—is this a simulation, a battlefield, or something far worse?
This time, with incomplete memories and time running out, he must uncover the truth before the cycle resets again… or accept that he was never meant to remember everything.
Do you think too ??
Here is the link
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-last-reset-end-of-the-loop\_35732387500401605
I have a story ongoing anyone wanna look at it if you like it then we can Collab ,