Anybody else remember this movie!
Just popped up on my YouTube, I haven't seen this in forever! He used to scare the f*** out of me when I was little lol. I'm about 10 minutes in and tbh I miss the slow burn, suspenseful movies from the 90s
Title: Wil
Format: Feature
Pages: 106
Genre: Psychological Thriller/Horror
Logline: To combat her feelings of loneliness, a young and fragile maintenance worker adopts a terrifyingly intelligent bird with an unnerving ability to mimic human speech. But as the paranoia surrounding her recent breakup continues to grow, her rivals begin to drop and she must decipher between her imagination and reality to evade the detectives on the case.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1to-e-mjSRLOQQkaZ-WTHeUuI7V65x0IZ/view?usp=drivesdk
**DISCLAIMER**
This is a repost. I had to go in and fix the unnecessary CAPITALIZATION and my scene headers.
- Feedback I'm looking for most:
I would love to know how you guys feel about Mallory and if my character's motivations are clear.
What sticks out to you, good or bad?
Does the dialogue sound natural? Or is it too 'on the nose'?
Thanks in advance!
Title: Wil
Format: Feature
Pages: 106
Genee: Psychological Thriller/Horror
Logline: To combat her feelings of loneliness, a lonely and fragile maintenance worker adopts a terrifyingly intelligent bird with an unnerving ability to mimic human speech. But as the paranoia surrounding her recent breakup continues to grow, her rivals begin to drop and she must decipher between her imagination and reality to evade the detectives on the case.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NN8TdMXszICdGZPwie6heMOFpyMM5hjk/view?usp=drivesdk
**DISCLAIMER**
I received some bad advice from my screenwriting professor lol I will fix the unnecessary CAPITALIZATION in my script. And based on some advice I've already received here on reddit, I will also be changing CONT to CONTINUOUS in my scene headers.
Thanks in advance for the feedback!
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Would love to hear your thoughts on my first act
(cut off at 20 pages so I attached a link for the full 25 pages)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LR_qiEmBlyGEPn_ikmWmXBloR1a4g-JU/view?usp=drivesdk
Hey everyone!
I just finished the 3rd draft of my screenplay and I would really appreciate any feedback. If anyone is also in need of feedback I'd be willing to return the favor! I just found this sub and I'm excited to search through it. I've attached the first 25 pages of my screenplay down below
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LR\_qiEmBlyGEPn\_ikmWmXBloR1a4g-JU/view?usp=drivesdk
Logline:
To combat her feelings of loneliness, a young and fragile maintenance worker adopts a terrifyingly intelligent bird with an unnerving ability to mimic human speech. But as the paranoia surrounding her recent breakup continues to grow, her rivals begin to drop and she must decipher between her imagination and reality to evade the detectives on the case.