Can y’all tell me how to improve my oc’s design? Please be nice! (Slight gore explained)
No style criticism please! This is the first time in months, and I’m trying not to delete the whole art piece off my procreate! 😅
Thank you, anyway-
**This character was made with the emoji challenge and I want to stay true to those emojis (**🕷️🥀🔥)
I changed his gender because he is a sort of self expression and I just recently realized I am trans.
But I would like to know what I could do to make him better as a character design. I’d like to keep the general idea but I feel like there’s something missing.
I know his hair is too thin, I just struggled to demonstrate the style I’m going for, it’s short fluffy hair but with a really long chunk that’s tied into a low pony, if anyone knows the name of this hairstyle please let me know!! A reference would be great!!
His hair his very important! It glows and can also heat up at will or his he gets overwhelmed with any emotion.
If his story matters here’s a sum (cringe warning)
He’s a lab experiment (I know, let me have my cringe baby) he had spider dna and other chemicals injected into him young. His rose eyes are t natural he had his real eyes removed as a punishment and seeds were planted in his eye sockets (I know that’s not realistic)
I added the last pic because I thought the blue hair looked odd on him