r/howtodrawmanga

First manga storyboard attempt — any advice?
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First manga storyboard attempt — any advice?

I’m practicing manga storyboarding and panel composition.

I’d appreciate feedback about perspective, panel flow, camera angles, and readability.

u/Sudden_Grapefruit_66 — 2 days ago
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Got a slight problem with speed lines🙃

I couldn’t find the picture i referenced but what to y’all think?

u/No_Republic_2813 — 11 days ago
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I feel that was a lacklustre title, I’m sorry. I used JJK’s 3-way Domain Expansion as reference while adding my own spin( a bad spin, Gege would fall ill seeing this). I haven’t drawn in like three days but whenever I couldn’t think up something or find some reference I would just draw simple shapes until I’m tired. How did I do, in your humble(or not) opinion? Positive and Negative criticism helps so fire away!😏

u/No_Republic_2813 — 14 days ago