
r/fritzleiber

Four pages of a fantasy comic I'm workin on, directly inspired by Fafhrd & the Grey Mouser
What do you think? Can you pinpoint the reference?
The Circle Curse (1970) - sparkles in places, but clearly just written to bridge a gap.
"The Circle Curse" is a companion piece to "Ill Met in Lankhmar". It was written in 1970, the year of possibly my favourite Leiber short story, the brilliantly dark warning piece "America the Beautiful", as well as the aforementioned "Ill Met" story.
"The Circle Curse" reads more like an interlude than a true short story.
That being said, it is certainly an interlude of good quality. It features one of my favourite Leiber similes of recent times:
"Ahead the sky was bright pink, like the bubbling rim of a great crystal goblet brimmed with effervescent red wine for the delight of gods, while the paler pink glow rising therefrom drove the last stars west".
It is also the "first" appearance of Ninguable of the Seven Eyes and Sheelba of the Eyeless Face. First as in first appearance in the Swords series of books. Their moody and mysterious appearances, well more of a "taster", leaves the reader wanting more.
Unfortunately the remainder of the story cannot quite keep up with the brilliant first few paragraphs. On the whole it's good, but again, more of an interlude - a connector to take readers from Swords and Deviltry into Swords Against Death.
As previously noted, I still chuckle thinking about the young people buying a book called "Swords Against Death" and being presented with phrases like "then a voice, sugary and unctuous, senescent though keen - a voice like a quavering flute - spoke amidst those dimmest glows".
The Green Millennium by Fritz Leiber [Cover by Bob Haberfield]
First published and this Orbit edition 1976.
My copy was selling new for NZ$1.95, and no real idea how I got hold of it.
And this is likely the last cover for a while. I have another 200 or so possible posts, but I'm leaving town (and the books) for a while in a couple of days. More when I get back here, whenever that is. :-)
Thieves' house (1943) - more dark and seedy Lankhmar: featuring traps, skeletons, betrayal, and cutting humour, but over too soon...
Originally published in Unknown Worlds, February 1943.
Set in decadent and shadowy Lankhmar. I must get around to compiling an exhaustive list of stories in that setting! There is also a welcome interlude in the Silver Eel. Many fabulous descriptions abound, for example:
"Again next night the fog crept into Lankhmar. Sounds were muffled and torches ringed with smoky halos".
A simple looking quote, but it actually uses both personification and religious imagery, in addition to flawlessly setting the mood...
This story involves traps - trapdoors, suspended knives, descending stones that crush unwary fingers, and the like. All written with suspense and surprise.
The dark tone reminded me of Leiber's earlier, incredibly dark (and damned entertaining) "The Hill and the Hole". The clever traps also had me reminiscing on the woefully under-anthologised "Black Corridor", which itself reminds me of the old cult horror movie "Cube"
The Mouser really took this story. You'll see what I mean when you read it. It's actually a good exemplar of his mischievous and clever personality. Which is also exemplified in the much later tale "The Mer She".
The prose is excellent and a large cut above what was typical in the pulps. The action scenes were, unsurprisingly, a highlight. I wouldn't say the characters were necessarily one dimensional - lankhmarians are, as we know, not exactly scrupulous. Fafhrd and the Mouser are also thieves!
My main gripe with this story is that it ended too quickly. The pay off was great, and quite scary (it reminded me of the cinematics the original Diablo, which is a game I suspect Leiber would have loved), but it was over in a flash, thus keeping this story from the lofty heights reached by "Ill Met in Lankhmar".
As I reread these books, I am coming around to the school of thought that Lankhmar represents Leiber's best. They certainly all seem to be a product of passion, unlike, say, some of his science fiction which (to quote the SF Encyclopedia) occasionally features a "straining for effect". That being said, no novel he wrote ever surpassed "The Wanderer".
Review: "The Mouser Goes Below" (1988) - moments of weird brilliance wedged between uncharacteristic tedium...
Boy, the reviews for this one were bad. Like, really bad. So much so that it led me to subconsciously put off reading it.
The critical reception has also not improved with time. There was no "critical reevaluation" in the same way as, say, Exile on Main Street.
Contrast the original reviews (which can be found on ISFBD - Internet Archive) with the current crop on Goodreads, and see what you think.
Anyway. Despite the reviews, I have now finally read The Mouser Goes Below. And I have to say...
It's not as bad as people say! There's plenty of the old magic weaved in through pages of tedium.
That being said, it's not quite the same quality as most of the other F and GM books. The writing feels laboured in places. Which is not surprising given the time in which it was written, i.e., when Leiber was in his seventies and probably near his creative exhaustion.
Exactly how Leiber managed to keep up the same furious quality for nearly his whole career is, in and of itself, damn near miraculous.
SPOILERS AHEAD
the book starts off slowly. We are introduced to "Fingers", a "cabin girl" who I didn't care for.
At some point during a night time ceremony with Fafhrd and the usual Rime Isle Cohort, the Mouser is literally dragged down through the earth vertically and buried alive.
Conceptually, the Mouser's premature burial is very interesting. As are the eerie and sinister visions he is presented with during his burial, including Ississi, the sea monster from the earlier story "The Mer She". These visions are my favourite part, and are just as effective as the disembodied heads in, say, Adept's Gambit.
The actual sensations of being buried alive, immobile and struggling to breath, are painstakingly (and convincingly) described.
I do not agree with the criticism that this story lacks action, hack and slash etc. Fafhrd and the Mouser are so much more than just pulp heroes. The best Leiber stories are, in my view, slow burns, and I include Lankhmar stories in that assessment. Try, say, "Horrible Imaginings" and see what you think...
However, I do agree with the critics that Chapter 19 (originally published, with a different intro paragraph, as "Slack Afternoon in Lankhmar Featuring Hisvet") is shoehorned in. It is also much more explicit than I cared for - not because I can't do explicit - but because it isn't the usual clever Leiber satire, but rather simple farce. Hisvet basically performs a full body cavity search in her hapless maid, who is accused of theft. And that's before the whips come out. The reason for this lesbian softcore interlude, and it's relevance to the overall story, is a mystery.
It's also followed by an (admittedly, vivid and effective) scene where the buried-alive Mouser is given a handjob by Pain, who I understand is basically the Grim Reaper. Yes, you read that right. Despite the extreme oddity, I did think this scene worked - very creepy indeed.
Unfortunately, the many above ground scenes with Fafhrd and the cohort digging holes to find the Mouser bored me to tears.
I also didn't really care for Fafhrd's side story, beginning about halfway through the novel, where he ascends skyward to a cloud ship filled with titillating women.
Overall, this one is worth a curiosity read, and Leiber completionists will still enjoy it despite the inconsistencies. Not even close to the best Lankhmar stories, like Ill Met in Lankhmar, or even the earlier Sea Magic.
I would also recommend Brian Murphy's review, found here: https://dmrbooks.com/test-blog/2020/8/4/the-later-leiber-a-review-of-the-second-book-of-lankhmar-part-2-of-2
Sutro Tower in San Francisco during fog looks like a pirate ship flying in the sky.
Review: Fritz Leiber, "The Mer She" (1978) - rich, expressive prose belies a darkly comic adventure...
First off, just go and buy "Heroes and Horrors". It's funny in that it may be my favourite Fritz Leiber collection, even though it is missing his absolute best stories, such as America the Beautiful, Gonna Roll the Bones, and the lesser known Black Corridor.
Part of Heroes and Horror's strength is that many of its stories are from the 1970s, when FL was on a hot streak. The two Lankhmar stories are effective displays of his richly detailed yet effortless prose, while also being tautly plotted.
Well-researched Jungian mystique seeps through in both A Bit of the Dark World (which I've already reviewed) and Dark Wings, which was originally created for a Ramsey Campbell anthology.
Of the four shorter length horror stories, Midnight in the Mirror World is as good a sample as any of Leiber's easy genius with the scares. And Belsen Express needs no introduction. The latter also features one of the top tier FL opening lines:
"George Simister watched the blue flames writhe beautifully in the gate, like dancing girls drenched with alcohol and set afire, and congratulated himself on having survived well through the middle of the Twentieth Century without getting involved in military service, world-saving, or any activities that interfered with the earning and enjoyment of money".
The real MVP, though, is The Terror from the Depths, a rarely-discussed Lovecraft homage overflowing with references, and obviously done with feeling (Leiber had personal letter correspondence with Lovecraft, which can be found in Writers of the Dark). Refer my earlier review.
Anyway, onto The Mer She, which was was written especially for Heroes and Horrors - already a good indication that this isn't the common "barrel scrapings" style collection that various publishers tend to throw together.
When I first read it, it thought it not much more than a rehash of Sea Magic. On the re-read, it is still obviously a companion piece (in that the first features Fafhrd, second the Mouser, and both feature sea monsters of one sort or the other) but it's so much more than just a rehash.
It's got some great comedy to boot, based primarily on the Mousers repeated lies to his crewman - yeesh, the Mouser is an unabashed scoundrel, isn't he. Certainly nothing like the pure "can't-do-wrong" Tolkienesque types. I certainly prefer my "heroes" to verge toward anti-hero, and even cross the line, and I adore the fact that Lankhmar is full of smoke, black magic, cunning, and sleaze.
In his forward to Heroes and Horrors, John Jakes provides the following passage from The Mer She as an example of Leiber's unmatched prose:
"The Mouser turned his head and looked down into her large green eyes, across which golden gleams moved rhythmically with the lamp's measured swinging".
For me, Sea Magic takes the belt overall. I just think it reads more smoothly, and the monster encounter is slightly more vivid. Don't let that deter you from reading The Mer She, though. They are both amazing, to be read over and over. How the Mouser uses the expensive silks and cloths in his battle is particularly memorable.
The Mer She was also subject to some wonderful cover art, as shown in the Wiki article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heroes_and_Horrors#
Review: The Jewels in the Forest (1939) - a superior standalone quest, with a massively dark twist
This is the very first published Fafhrd and Gray Mouser story. Originally called "Two Sought Adventure", and first appearing in Unknown, August 1939.
This was actually much, much better than I remembered it. There are action scenes a plenty and, unlike much recent "fantasy", they are no insult to your the intelligence.
If anything, I'm sure the language was too challenging for younger readers... Heaven forbid they understand what an "augery" is.
It only gets slightly long winded when the ambuscade (yet another new word...) makes its second appearance.
Perhaps the scene I enjoyed the most was the night the heroes spent with the peasant family, with Fafhrd telling tall tales and his companion performing magic tricks. Splendid. Reminds me of the elegiac and lyrical "Piper at the Gates if Dawn" by Richard Cowper.
The ending is a classic twist, and still works. The implications are very scary, if you think about it.
The old fashioned linguistic aesthetic is brilliantly realised and is consistent throughout the whole piece (and the entire Fafhrd and Gray Mouser collection).
I think Leiber could have (and probably wanted to) make this one even darker, but of course the editors of Unknown wouldn't have allowed too much splatter.
A stonking great standalone tale. I love these self contained quests where the author has no need to reveal his cards too early, and is happy to leave hints of a richly realised backdrop to spark the reader's imagination.
Absolutely read this one. In fact, just get the Swords Against Death collection.
Authors that remind me of Fritz Leiber #1 - Richard Cowper
Born John Middleton Murry Jr. Also wrote novels under the name Colin Murry, "Colin" being an early nickname.
As far as I know, Mr Cowper kept a low profile in the science fiction circles. He attended an authors workshop with Christopher Priest among others, resulting in a sharp and witty article from Priest (Priest rated Mr Cowper highly!). https://christopher-priest.co.uk/essays/contemporaries-portrayed/a-meeting-with-richard-cowper
Mr Cowper is criminally underrated. I just finished reading (again) The Twilight of Briareus".
It's a smashing novel, as Priest says, a fresh take on the disaster trope.
Essentially, a distant star explodes, and the story concerns both the natural disasters and the mysterious worldwide infertility that follows. Extra terrestrial life is hinted at.
The protagonist, Calvin, is an typical Cowper character - an earnest yet quick witted academic. He is clearly modelled off Cowper himself, who read Anglo Saxon and taught at private schools. Both Cowper and Leiber put huge swaths of autobiographical elements into their fictions, to my delight.
People have commented that this book is overly ambitious, being a fusion of both diaster and first contact. I never understood this critique. The novel is deliberately and refreshingly patient with its revelations. The restraint shown by the author is nothing short of extraordinary. If you're looking for fast paced "Consider Phlebas" style writings, look elsewhere...
The prose is, as expected, wonderful. Particularly beautiful is the description of the exploded star (as visible from earth), the snow-filled future visions, and the scene involving the pond and the pair of dragonflies.
It's a real pity Mr Cowper is a relative unknown. I sometimes think he's almost embarrassed to be lumped with pulp authors like, say, Doc Smith.
The cover I posted is simply epic. It reminds of the cover for Led Zeppelin's album Houses of the Holy. However, there are also versions of this novel which have, quite frankly, ghastly cover art. These can be found on r/bad science fiction covers.
I don't think Cowper or Leiber ever met. Who knows if they would have got along. I do think that Twilight of Briareus has a lot of heart - just like Leiber's The Wanderer.
Equally good are Cowper's White Bird of Kinship Trilogy, and his final novel, the elegiac ghost story Shades of Darkness.