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Littlepip's earlyfic Velvet obsession is my favourite

Littlepip's earlyfic Velvet obsession is my favourite
Decided to sketch out the main trio!! Littlepip looks like she waited too much, LOL!!
a little sorry for my massive blackjack slander on my last art!!
I'll start
Fallout Equestria:
-Velvet Remedy is a good and interesting character, definitely better than Calamity
-Homage and Red Eye are wasted potential and criminally underutilised as characters. I feel like Homage only exists to >!give Littlepip a girlfriend!<and the author is too comfortable sidelining her more interesting traits. And Red Eye is probably my favourite villain from this universe, but he still should have gotten way more page time.
-after building up Red Eye and the Goddess for so long, it felt wrong to >!kill them off so quickly and have the Enclave be the main villains!<
-Litllepip >!escaped from Fillydelphia!<way too easily
-having the entire final battle >!happen offscreen !<was a terrible fucking decision
-Too many flashbacks! Too many memory orbs!
Project Horizons (disclaimer- I'm only past book 3)
-Rampage is consistently insufferable and annoying. Every time the characters have a heart-to-heart, you can count that bitch to barge in, say dumb edgy shit and ruin the tone.
-Boo is an unnecessary character that contributes nothing to the narrative (at least so far)
->!the author coming up with an excuse to genocide Stable 99!< was a cheap and lazy move, it would've been more interesting to leave it intact and opposing the protagonists
-Goldenblood kinda feels like a self-insert. ,,Oh hey look, it's my OC, he's very smart and dedicated and imaginative and morally ambiguous and can talk back to anyone, also >!Fluttershy loves him and they have a kid!<!"
->!Twilight x Big Mac!<is like... ugh, just why?
-Too many flashbacks! Too many memory orbs!
"Chapter 33: Crusaders
Homage broke into a laugh. The mare threw her arms around me, hugging me so fiercely we both fell into the small lake that had formed on the roof.
I splashed her. She splashed back. The two of us lay there in the cold, pooling water, kicking waves and sprays at each other until I could swear we were wetter than the rain was.
âGive up?â she squealed. Absolutely not! My finishing move was to telekinetically grasp about a barrel full of the water, hovering it over her head. I pointed up with a hoof and got a most delightful squeak out of her before dropping the deluge onto my Homage.
âOkay, okay, I give up!â she cried out. Slowly, we both got to our hooves. Homage was shivering, dripping, her blue hair hanging straight down like a wet curtain. She was impossibly beautiful."
If say you become your Fallout equestria oc in the fallout equestria world. for 24 hours what would you do for that 24 hours ?
This will be an important character for my comic, soon Iâll share the notes Iâve made about this legion but before Iâll make illustrations of Riptade and the atoli tribe and subtribes for the mermay, keep watching đżđ
She has really nice teeth for a chem addicted giraffe lol
Because if not, then holy hell does she have a photographic memory to hyperfixation levels. Who else would drop in paraphrases or complete word-for-word references like this?
This quote precluding Chapter 24 is referencing to the Vault-Tec guided tour in the Museum of Technology during Fallout 3
Is there something I missed?
Like, it's said to be loud by lil pip, so how did nobody notice velvet was gone until it would be hard to track her?
Listening to the audiobook after having read it two years ago. But it bothered me even the first time I read it.
Update: thanks y'all! Never been in a place like that, I assumed it could be heard most places
IMPORTANT CONFUSION APOLOGY FROM THE LAST PIECE:
I made a comment, saying that adding NSFW tag to a post makes my profile marked NSFW. This is wrong. It only works that way when I post to an NSFW community. If I tag a post with NSFW spoiler in SFW community, my profile still stays uncensored! Sorry for the confusion.
Anyhow, welcome to this piece đ
This time, I used quite a different layer structure. Itâs a little overengineered, but it works! It uses a bunch of Kritaâs Clone and Erase layers. Clone layers are a unique feature of Krita, but Iâm not so sure about the Erase blending mode. This is all required to have colored lineart. I made it so that lines are erased in the areas with more intense light. The downside of a complex layer structure is that given a pixel on an image, itâs hard to tell which layer contributes to it, and this increases the time to fix small mistakes, which I notice. Iâm sure my approach is still not ideal, as I keep changing it literally every single time.
Also, Iâve noticed that Gloryâs pose looks a bit stiff way too late. I saw it all the way through, but couldnât name it exactly. I think she had a little more interesting expression on the sketch.
âŠAnd, I like how Google Translate roundtrips the title via Chinese to this:
"Such a romantic gaze from this mama horse đđ"
If you havenât already, I recommend giving this a read. Iâve been working on it for years and Iâm finally happy with this current version of the story
AppleButter was born into the Apple lineage. A bloodline synonymous with resilience, leadership, and sacrifice dating back to pre-war Equestria. His family being hoof deep in history.
The Apple name carries weight within the Rangers. His great great grandfather, Paladin Red Apple, was known for safeguarding critical infrastructure from raider and Enclave interference during the early days of the Wastelandâs collapse. His father, Scribe Golden Harvest, upheld that legacy with unwavering discipline, while his mother, Knight Sergeant Green Apple, became respected for her tactical planning and logistical coordination.
He trained and proved himself formally into the Steel Rangers and quickly distinguished himself in heavy weapons specialization and defensive fortification strategy. By age twenty five, he had earned the rank of Knight, serving under Star Paladin Ironclad Dawn in a unit assigned to defend critical pre war technological sites from raider encroachment.
Finally he would be deployed to one of his first official missionsÂ
The mission itself seemed straightforward:
secure and hold an aging hydroelectric power facility a relic of pre war infrastructure rumored to contain salvageable energy cores and intact data banks.
Instead, it became a siege.
Raiders descended in overwhelming numbers, far more organized than anticipated. Communications were jammed. Reinforcements never came. The facilityâs outer perimeter collapsed within hours.
AppleButterâs unit fortified the turbine chamber and held their ground.
One by one, Rangers fell.
A Knight crushed beneath collapsing catwalk debris.
Another cut down covering a breach in the coolant hall.
A scribe executed while attempting to preserve data archives.
The fighting stretched through the night smoke, flickering emergency lights, the deafening roar of failing generators echoing through steel corridors.
Finally it was only One knight and one paladin left. The two fought tooth and nail not for the objectiveâŠbut for survival. They had finally managed to get outside of the power plant failing the mission, however the paladin was struck through one of his power armors joint causing him to bleed.Â
He turned to butters and gave him one final order.Â
âRetreat, Iâll hold them off.â
ReluctantlyâŠhe obeyed. Turning tail and running as the sounds of gunfire echoed throughout the wasteland before finally stoppingâŠâŠ
What had happened was a raider got ahold of a flamer, using a pulse grenade to shut the paladins armor down temporarily before essentially cooking him inside his own armor becoming nothing but a darkened black hull of armor. To this day it can be found. Some calling it âThe Paladins Restâ a reminder to Applebutter of his loss if not just a mentor, not just a leader, but somepony he considered a father.
To this day he still serves the rangers, not because he wants to. But because he believed itâs what his mentor wouldâve wanted.