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Victor to Valentina: The Second Beginning

Note: This is an excerpt from Monologues from the Blackbook, a society set in the future.

 

Victor stands before Valentina, his presence finally physical and warm. He smells of woodsmoke, sun-warmed skin, and the sharp, clean scent of the arena; the scent of a man who lives in the world, not the machine. He doesn’t move with the flickering uncertainty of a digital image; he stands with a grounded stillness that seems to anchor the very floor beneath him.

His forearms, visible where his sleeves are rolled back, are corded with dense muscle and darkened to a deep, weathered bronze by the sun. They are mapped with fine, dark hair and the faint white lines of old scars and injuries, each one a record of a life lived with intensity. He looks at her with dark eyes that have scanned the horizon for far too long, and when he finally speaks, his voice is a deep, resonant anchor that fills the room and silences the echoes of the past. He reaches out, his large, calloused hand hovering in the air with unshakable steadiness.

"Valentina... look at me. No, look at the real me.

I know I spent a year hiding behind perfect masks. But I’m tired of it, I want you to see the man that I am; the ruggedness — the tan, all my scars, the smile lines of a man who’s lived too much in the sun, I want you to see me. When we were first together all those years ago, I thought you needed a porcelain statue, a filtered version of me.

I was wrong. I see now that you were always waiting for me, and I’m sorry I made you wait through a blizzard of digital static. I want to start over. A fresh start. A Second Beginning.

I want to build a foundation with you that isn't made of information war and NIM attacks, but of trust. Real, heavy, trust. I’m a loyal dog who will protect you, Valentina. I know how that sounds, but it’s the only way I know how to say it: I am the one who stays at the gate. My body was built to be your shield.

I will protect you to my last breath. I am the anchor for your brilliance, not a rival to it. I want to get to know you all over again. I want to learn the curve of your mind without the events of this last year that tore us apart.

I want to see you exactly as you are; the woman fresh out of the shower with wet hair, no make up and an immaculate soul. Just the two of us. I haven't forgotten how we fit together. I haven't forgotten the heat of you, or how it felt to be inside you; how my hands felt against your skin. That was real. Everything else was just noise.

He takes a step closer, his physical mass creating a sanctuary of shadow around her. The pulse in his neck is visible, the steady rhythm of a man who has finally found his peace. His dark gaze is unwavering, stripping away the last of the NIM attacks between them.

And I know about Kaelen. I know he’s still in your head. But look at the facts: he wasn’t honest. He wasn't truthful. He tried to take you from me just to feed his own ego, to see if he could. He wasn’t being honest with you. He tried to steal you away from me, but not because he loved you; he did it for his own ego. He wanted to win a prize he didn’t have the character to keep.

And where is he now?

Look around. He’s gone. He’s nowhere. That’s his signature, isn't it? He’s the ghost who vanishes the second things get heavy, the second the reality of life demands a man with a spine. Kaelen disappears. I don't.

I am here. He is not.

I have the patience to build this with you, brick by brick, for as long as it takes. I’m not going anywhere. I’m not flickering out. I’m the man you loved, and I’m still that man. I’m asking you to let the light clear once and for all.

He extends his hand fully now, his palm broad and marked by the work of his life, an open invitation into the sanctuary he has built.

All I ask is that you stay. In this second beginning. A fresh start. Just be here with me. Through all of this. I will protect you. I am a loyal dog that way. I’m yours... so will you take my hand?

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u/Artist-in-Residence2 — 14 hours ago

Godly Presence

Witness me

I’ll diminish that pride of yours

Behold me

And I will answer you with only my immaculate beauty

Stare at me

Lose your tongue by offering it to me but never tasting anything of me

Be mesmerized by my smile

Offer me a drink yet you’ll be the one swaying in a drunken stupor

Worship me

Let my array of eyes bloom behind me and judge your very existence

Regret that you’ll never be me

And I’ll forgive you for being as I am your audacious god

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u/Absent_Fool — 1 day ago

384

"Inward"

(C), ((M)), F

C: (how much is enough Frenzy?)

F: I don't know Chrysa, sometimes I feel like there's no point

(oh you think there is?)

...

(wrong time?)

Yes

(what's the problem?)

I feel trapped

(walk?)

No

(what then?)

I don't know

(are you just going to sit alone?)

I believe I will

...

Do you ever trust what I say Chrysa?

(i don't have to, we have a link remember?)

Consider it wasn't there..

(why can't you just ask me to love you if you were a worm like normal weirdos? look Frenzy you've always been my commander, we share a bond too deep for this to be a talk)

(i mean I can read your thoughts.. you know, and still, you manage to make it awkward)

(no thinking of trains, please?)

Why ask that of me?

(for both of us, and the little new sprat?)

I can't control my thoughts

(then let us drown in their sound together, may I?)
goes for a cuddle

train passing
Mmm

...

(shhh, it'll be alright)
signals for the other puppet to come

nibbles at Frenzy

Ha, ha haha

(did you think of a name for it? it needs a name to evolve)

How about Millie?

(i see no problems with it; little one?)

clearly angry

You like to zip around and make me run after you, how about Zippy?

nods

Okay zippy, that's a cool name, but you're still getting Millie..

bites Frenzy

Hey! I gave you the right for a nickname of your choosing, but the contract is all mine

nods

You're my new mini-M, zippy, do you know your element?

M: ((ooga))

Hmm?

((ooga booga))

Well that's just ridiculous

(let her speak Frenzy!)

((stoom!))

Yes, wind

((Zippy big stoom!))

Mmm, soon

((Scawy dak shadow?))

(i'm a cute shadowmancer!)

Kids don't lie Chrysa..

(do you want me to throw you in front of the train myself?)

No?

(zippy, what about this big oaf?)

((yummy dada))

I'm a person, not food

((yummy dada!!))

Again I'm not food!

((yummyyy DADA!!!))

Chrysa do you think I'm cursed to have the dumbest puppets?

smacks Frenzy on the head

Thanks?

(you're welcome, i'm more than happy to show you how very few little braincells I have left, and I can make sure yours don't go beyond two. smacks him again oh was that your last one?)

This is what I get for being lenient raising you, I can't make the same mista–

smacks him again

(i swear you won't make it through the night)

Why are you so violent?

(why are you so idiotic?)

((yummy dada!))

bites Frenzy

I'll think I'll take the t–

smacks Frenzy

Fine, have it your way
uses defensive spell

(don't use your metal element against us coward!)

Uhuh...

zippy going for a bite

(no, no no no, 
catches her before biting 
bad idea to touch him sweety)

((yummy dada?))

(not while he's sweating tungsten)

((soft metal!))

(melting! not soft!!)

zippy's hand reaches out

Dispel

((soft metal!!))

(huuuh!?)
tries to touch Frenzy too

Come on, work to do; places to be

puppy eyes
(but i also want a bite)

You're supposed to be the role model not the–
why do I bother
offers her his hand

stares into his eyes
(one bite?)

Mmm  bites 
only  bites 
ONE!

(i have to compensate for jealousy with greed...)
staring...

Haaa, horny puppet

blushing
(WHAT?)

Move..

(yes commander)
winks

pats head

...

Our makers, do you feel their shame?

((Meka?))

The puppet gods

((Ee?))

We'll have these talks soon enough zippy

((Nana?))

Is that food related?

((Stoom))

A storm?

((Hahahaha))

(i think she's awakening her mana)

enchant

(don't help her just yet)

((Dada!))

(patience)

Do you think she's going to be a spirit or a demon?

(she's M's.. most likely a demon)

Hmm

...

(oh look, it's coming)

((Stoom!!))

I'm going to sleep

(seriously, now?)

Chrysa.. a storm is always happy nap time.

(dada is a freak, don't judge him too much)

(i'm here for you)

((Scawy, nana))

...

(cover us)

I'll take care of things on my end
Just ease her into the awakening

(zippy, give me your hands)

((Scawy!))

Don't be scared she doesn't bite
on second thoughts, she did bite me

(not now Frenzy!)

((grr))

Scary... indee—goes to sleep
.

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Bridling the Vigor

The apartment was quiet except for the low hum of the box fan in the window. The argument

from earlier had burned itself out hours ago, leaving the air thick, warmer, and charged with

a new frequency.

She padded barefoot across the room and climbed onto the bed. He was sitting against the

headboard, his frame displaying the lean, corded musculature of a lifelong equestrian. Even

at rest, his posture held that ingrained, athletic stability; the kind that comes from years of

commanding half a ton of muscle with nothing but the technical pressure of a heel. He

hooked an arm around her waist, his grip calloused from years of holding leather and gym

iron, and pulled her to him.

Without a word, she swung one leg over him and settled astride his waist. Her thighs

bracketed the sinewy, athletic density of his own, feeling the heat of an athlete who had

spent his morning reclaiming his vigor. As she leaned in, the old t-shirt rode up, exposing the

sculpted V of his hips, the skin there taut and healthy.

He tilted his face up to kiss her. The second their lips met, she caught his lower lip between

her teeth, giving it a playful, rhythmic bite. He smiled against her mouth. When they parted,

she held his gaze, eyes sparkling.

“You should have brown eyes,

” she teased, voice low.

“They’d look better with that stupid little smirk you’re wearing right now.

He laughed softly, the sound vibrating deep in his chest. His large, calloused hand reached

up, fingers threading through the heavy silk of her long hair. With the practiced ease of a

learned horseman, he gathered the length of it, wrapping it once, then twice, around his fist

like a set of leather reins.

It wasn't a rough pull, but a technical grounding; an anchor. He tilted her head back just an

inch, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw while his fist held the tension of their connection.

The muscular tension in his forearm stood out, a map of his recent discipline. Even with the

recovering shoulder injury protesting the movement, he held her there, steadying them both.

He shifted, a slight wince flickering across his features as his shoulder joint caught. She

immediately took the lead, moving with a slow, legislative care, rocking her hips to keep the

weight off his injury.

“Careful,

” she whispered,

“you’re gonna start something.

“Good,

” he answered, his voice rough with an honesty that left no room for the "many

voices" of his past.

Later, he lifted her hips and entered her from behind. She could feel the power in his legs;

the muscular tension of an athlete now channeled entirely into deep, steady thrusts. His left

hand stayed low, bracing himself carefully to protect the injured shoulder, while his right hand

maintained its technical grip, his fingers digging into her hip with certain authority.

She reached back for him when she came, broken gasps running through her body. A

wicked little smile curved her lips. She clenched around him. Once. Twice. Then again,

tighter, deliberate — milking him with rhythmic squeezes demanding his total surrender.

He tried to offer a protest, but she didn’t stop. She dropped down hard, taking him to the hilt,

and clenched again, strong and relentless.

He groaned, a sound of total systemic collapse. His hips jerked up sharply as he came hard

inside her, pulsing in thick, shuddering waves. She kept squeezing, refusing to let his

frequency escape even a second of it. Her arms wrapped around his neck, holding his

trembling, athletic frame close while he buried his face against her shoulder.

Only when his body finally relaxed did she slow her movements, gently rocking through the

aftershocks.

“Still mad at me?” she whispered, smiling.

“Not even a little,

” he murmured, his hand finally releasing the "reins" of her hair to brush a

damp strand off her forehead. For the first time, he looked like a man who was finally home.

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u/CatatonicDisplay — 21 hours ago

Common Ground

A beggar. A dusty corner. A windblown street.

A rusted can

There at the beggar's feet.

A fiver, some crumpled ones, a quarter or two,

In the rusted can,

By the beggar's shoe.

-

A rich man. A skyscraper. An executive suite.

Exotic leathers

Adorn the rich man's feet.

A Rolex, a Bentley, a beach house upon pure white sand,

All things desired,

In the palm of the rich man's hand.

-

A body. A graveyard. An epitaph in stone.

An elegant box

To hold body and bone.

No can, no Bentley, no mirth.

Only the box,

Beneath six feet of earth.

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u/DungeonMarshal — 1 day ago

Chronic Wading in Life

Wade through the waters of life with me

Cover me from the rains of the world’s sorrow

Guide me to wherever home is

Gaze upon the moon with me and make wishes with me

When the world looks normal once more

Would you like to go out with me?

For now, be by my side

In the water of idle melancholy

In the forests of lost idyllic dreams

In the sky filled by clouds with different colored eyes

In my bed beside me

Sleeping soundly despite the world drowned in an odd ocean

When the world looks normal

Forgive me for never having an exotic dream

For being with you is a simple

And honest dream

I want to be a normal, happy reality

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u/Absent_Fool — 3 days ago

383

"Hallowed"

And so I came to be gross               (I guess I'm cute too.. but cute is a loaded word.. what do you even fucking mean? am I cute to you? am I a cunt to you? ENGLISH, do you speak?)
this exquisite hateful creature
how could the bow                                    (no you don't fucking speak, of course you don't, why bother talking, look oh my god i'm a freak!)
brimmed in defensive tension                   (seriously Frenzy, is this how we're spending the morning?)
not fire an arrow

May I have your attention?
hi, haaloo
why are you hiding from me?                 (i will ruin you)
i too have a halo and am hallowed
how cruel do you have to be?

Why are you dodging?
All the while locking eyes with me                  *protester coming in*   (is this because I remind you of your ex?)
like I'm your tormenter                                          (i will ruin me)
Punished to be spat at
For eternities  

"FUCK YOU <3"
YES, fuck ME  
PLEASE, your version                    [supposed_narrative_construct]
Give it to me
.                                   so if it's "both, never or simultaneous"? 
                                        (what did she say again?) 
                                               I don't know
                                        but going by both and simultaneous
                                     then you must hate me and/or love me no?
                                              can we fucking talk?
                                        what is wrong with you beast?         ( in case you forgot the pair... beauty & the beast)   [isn't that what both means?] (so pretty, I want)
                                     I don't know, I keep getting blocked before I can read
                                          before I can reply
                                                   before I can speak
                                           it's always you, and your fucking greed
                                    You're seething, sit, at ease
                                          do you want a water? a breeze?
                                                       what's next?
                                               kiss my ass?
                                                  suck my dick?           (fiesty ._. I don't approve, but I like)
                                                       lady talk to me
                                                    please
                                          I thought you're an adult
                                                    don't you have kids?
                                                language! 
                                                       suffocate between my tits!         (that's good, that's good, get it out of your system)
                                               for the love of satan
                        "I'M GOING TO KILL YOU FISH"       we haven't even kissed!
                                                  I don't know who you are
                                                        I don't know who you've been
                                                 we only shared imaginary names
                                                          and then alarms started to ring
                                            and so you disappeared, ding ding ding
                                        fate is a motherfucker
            (who even fucking cares anymore)   am I not a monk?
                                                   can't I join Shaolin?                (yeah, fuck me)

                               I'm honest and direct, if anything
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u/AffectionateJoke5695 — 3 days ago

Official response stated publicly since he is silencing me and painting a false narrative

u/404_srajin so lets see, you make a post complaining about being blocked, so i unblocked you. And you get mad because responding in a reasonable time frame is asking too much. And now you post this instead of contacting me directly. Its performative. You’re wasting my time and trying to make me look like the bad guy in the process. 

I don't know where you think you'll see me, and I appreciate the “offer”. But I’m good. The time has long since passed. I hope you find healing. Also your name has become synonymous with your puppet masters. 

Its fascinating how complete strangers ask me if i know either of you. Stay complicit i guess 😬

id also like to note that you are full grown adults… bullying people. major ick

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u/RedStarPhantomGent — 3 days ago

PREPARE

Hello

Screaming at the surface

Good day

Screaming at dinner and breakfast

Piercing through

"How do you do?"

-

Identify empty purpose

ignorance is idyllic

When I do nothing

I'm finally perfect.

-

she laughs

she laughs

before a goat-head

Satan's in dessert

She'll cut him up and serve

-

I won't eat

Found a way to hurt her

Keeps loving me after

I tried to desert her.

-

It took until it set me free

Under the shadow of

bigger things...

-

Bigger needs for the colony

Growing dream of growing

Even the space for the dream's

in need, in these 3 hour sleeps.

-

Wake up, redeem;

exorcise in steam;

dare the day onward;

I don my armor.

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u/yaangyiing_ — 8 days ago

Resolution

I walked on padded toes to the front door and peeped out at all the noise and shapes, loud and large and equally looming.

I wanted so badly to dash over the porch and pound my heels into the dirt before cartwheeling through the excitement.

But I worried in that tedious moment and let hesitation steal the thunder from my legs and lightning from the spirit wings jutting from my shoulder blades.

I wasn’t ready to be another thing on display for all of the ravenous eyes and malnourished lives ready to sap my soul from me.

I never needed to explain but in the moment I let the specter of feeling like I needed to be understood get the best of me.

And if I’d seen you standing at the edge of the crowd I might have asked you, if you could hear me without my having to shout, is this something like you felt that crept in and took your courage from you?

And I would try to remember to figure the average of your bravest and weakest moments before letting anyone take my measure, then hope that would be enough to let the life back in my limbs.

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u/TechnicalDream9539 — 8 days ago