u/wiseguycreates

So I’m creating a story and I’m creating my elevator pitch( if you don’t know,An elevator pitch is a concise, 30- to 60-second summary of who you are, what you do, or the value of an idea. Its primary goal is to spark interest and open the door to a deeper conversation,) this is mines please tell me if this is a good pitch or not and please give feedback. If yall could help that would be really great and I’m super thankful. Anyway let me know what you think and what I could do better. Thanks again

“When the world is unbalanced two gods must emerge to balance it whilst keeping their humanity In tact. “