u/thecoconutcracker

This is my second short song - I am wondering what any of you smarties thoughts are on how I can improve on this?

Background: I am a chemistry major at the University of Washington who kind of fell in love with music theory due to how challenging and complex it is. For that same reason also, that is why I can only do it as a hobby. I have also been playing around with vocals in logic pro.

The hardest part that I seem to have when making these songs is the intro layering, anyone know how to make it more smooth?

Thanks y'all