u/statisticsandwich111

Recent grad trying to make the transition from a small law firm to corporate financial analysis hopefully in an entertainment company like NBCUniversal. Biggest change needed is metrics but i'm having trouble thinking of what to write. Any examples or good websites for samples will help immensely!

As title says. Still in progress but should be greatly improved. Please tell me how to improve it. Biggest change needed is metrics but i'm having trouble thinking of what to write. Any examples or good websites for samples will help immensely!

As title says. Only internship I was able to land didn't have much finance experience and the law firm is my family's so it wasn't really corporate FP&A. All of my corporate financial analysis skills I learned in school. 6 months of applying and have yet to land an entry level role. Any and all help will be really helpful and anyone in Los Angeles looking for a hard working employee please reach out! Thank you!

edit: Thanks all for the feedback so far. Lots to improve, organize, and rewrite. Just for clarification I'm only targeting entry level and junior roles as well. Turns out at some point I actually turned off spell check messing around with "find and replace" and forgot to turn it back on before adding back bullet points... fixing this mess in the next couple of days with all the feedback!

Edit 2: Thank you all for the advice, I'm making all the changes I can. If there's any examples of good fp&a resumes you recommend I take a look at please comment or DM me!