u/nonethewiser08

Sabbatical

Sometimes I wish I could not exist
In the world for a while.
It's not that I wish to leave this life
In exchange for another somewhere else.
Nor would I want to erase my footprints
From the soils of existence;
I'd just like to unzip and step out of my body,
Like someone arriving home
After a long, cold day takes off their coat
And hangs it gently in the closet
For tomorrow.
If I could, I'd like to float around
In the cosmos for a while;
Looking down on earth without weight,
Seeing how close I could get to the sun
Before the heat forces me back.
I would try to grab hold of a star,
And watch it glow in my hands.
And when it starts descending,
Catch it by its tail, and ride it down to earth again.
But if I decided not to go that far,
I could settle for climbing oak trees.
As a kid, I remember following
Their long, crooked trunks with my eyes,
Thinking they looked so tall they could
Brush the sky with their branches;
Tangling the clouds in their leaves.
I'd like to climb a tree that high.
Maybe not so high as to grab stars,
But high enough to feel their heat.
I'd climb along the dry, silvery branches
One by one until I was at the top,
Where I could rest myself against the trunk
And look down at an orange fire
Burning in the gloom of spring twilight;
Safe from the flames, and only being touched
By the distant smell of smoke.

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u/nonethewiser08 — 8 hours ago

I Give Up (Three Strikes And I’m Out)

I doubt anyone will read this or care,
But I will not post here anymore.
I came here with the intent
Of sharing my work with 
Fellow poets and artists; 
To get some helpful feedback,
Advice, and perhaps, some 
Intermittent praise.

And while I don’t need millions
Of upvotes and comments 
Proclaiming me the second coming
Of Shakespeare crossed with Frost,
Longfellow, and the legendary
Status of someone like Homer;
Seeing little to no upvotes
Or feedback each week

Is quite disheartening. 
Especially when you share
Work you’re proud of, or put
Weeks, months, perhaps even
Years worth of work and thought
Into; bearing a piece of yourself
Before thousands of strangers
Is never easy,

But it becomes discouraging
When your posts always bomb,
And you see other poems
Receive double the amount
Of engagement and praise
In an hour that you’d be lucky
To come close to receiving 
In nearly a month.

I’m happy for my fellow writers,
I want to build every artist up
As creativity is the best thing we have.
I believe it’s the last thing that separates us
From robots; beings who only imitate,
Fantasize, and dramatize experiences;
I say until you know the sensation of
Tears and pounding heads

Don’t talk to me about human sadness.
But I digress. Creativity, art, imagination,
These are things worth protecting and building up
And I always support those who
Do their part to make that happen.
But, I would argue, if there’s one thing creative 
People and artists need, not want,
It’s validation.

This is something I have not
Received in this subreddit.
I am grateful for the upvotes
And comments I did receive;
They’re not unappreciated
Or unnoticed. But I have now
Posted three poems and felt the need 
To delete them all.

The days passed, and the notifications
Tab remained empty, in the meantime
I couldn’t help but take stock
Of the other poems recently posted,
All with upvotes and comments 
Approaching the 20s or 30s.
Maybe this community seeks out poems
That I do not write.

Maybe I’m not a good fit here,
Or maybe this is simply not
My calling after all. I’m not sure.
All I know is I did not find 
What I was looking for here,
So I’ve decided it’s time
To try and look elsewhere,
The way a goose might

Take to the skies and fly towards 
An open, citrus-tinted horizon
After the first flakes of winter
Came down and settled on his pond.
Like a moth flying from one house
After its flickering yellow porch light 
Had been overtaken by others 
Hunting for some light.

I appreciate the opportunity
Subreddits like this give,
And who knows, I may end up
Coming back to give it another try.
Just like the goose would have to fly back
When the frost subsides, the snow melts,
And his pond returns to water; finally free
Of the thick, cold ice. 

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u/nonethewiser08 — 10 days ago

Blue Moon

All along the road of dust,
The knight clanks his armor
That's covered in rust.

His eyes feel like they never have slept,
His cheeks still stained
From the tears he wept.

Suddenly the air was filled with smoke,
The lady on fire
So calmly spoke,

“Won’t you come closer, you're looking cold,
And I long for the embrace
Of a knight so bold."

With this he took her by the hand,
And began to glow
Where he did stand.

The ashes swayed to the songbird’s tune.
‘Twas all beneath
The bright blue moon.

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u/nonethewiser08 — 11 days ago

It was midnight when you came a-scratchin’ at my door
Oh, it was midnight when you came a-scratchin’ at my door
An’ I can’t get no sleep Lord,  I hear his feet draggin’ on the floor

I climbed the highest mountain, looked as far as I could see
I climbed the highest mountain, honey, looked as far as I could see
But that ol’ phantom honey, you know it kept on followin’ me

I saddled up my pony, black as the devil’s bones
I saddled up my pony, he’s black as the devil’s bones
But my pony found another rider, left me standin’ all alone

They were burning wood all through the night, now my house is full of smoke
They were burning wood all through the night, now my house is full of smoke
Well I opened up all the windows, but I keep on gettin' choked

They don’t treat me right here, honey, don’t no one treat me kind
They don’t treat me right here, honey, don’t no one treat me kind
They’ll burn your barn and steal your crops, then send you the bill for their time

It was midnight when you came a-scratchin’ at my door
Oh, it was midnight when you came a-scratchin’ at my door
Won’t you leave me alone, phantom, you know I just can’t sleep no more!

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u/nonethewiser08 — 12 days ago

Hey there Phillip,
Just wanted to let you know
I went ahead 
And mowed your lawn.

Hope you don’t mind.
I thought your grass was getting
Too high, and you
Were out of town.

I know you like
Doing things all by yourself,
But now you can
Finish that shed!

Can’t wait to see!

- Have a good one.

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u/nonethewiser08 — 13 days ago

Went down to see the king.
He lived in the bayous by night.
In the marsh he made his home,
And hid himself from the light.
Well it was all upon a crisp night,
October moon so high,
When I called out to that lonesome king
Beneath the twinkling sky.

A throne of one hundred cattails,
A crown of mud and sticks,
“This can’t be real,” I said to myself.
“This must be a trick!”
“Oh, this ain’t no trick son!”
I heard the gypsy say.
“A thief came the other night,
And took all his riches away.”

Around that time the sun was breaking.
The land was covered in dew.
I walked out of his kingdom,
And headed home to the hills I knew.
When I arrived I went to the lake,
And sat beside that murky fountain.
I put my feet into the water,
And watched the sun come up over the mountain.

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u/nonethewiser08 — 15 days ago

The dawn of winter's day is gray.
Upon the frozen lake is snow,
Where a frost-covered deer will go
To find a drink; perhaps to pray,

For somewhere soft and dry to stay.
He longs for all the ice to melt,
And to recall when last he felt
The warm embrace of summer days.

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u/nonethewiser08 — 18 days ago