For the good of the Community. Debut novel.
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Chapter One
The meeting
Havenreach
Pop. 10,293 · August 23rd 2027
Sqector 17 · Runner Training District
Status Stable
Monitors Active
The hall was too quiet. Too polished.
A metallic clang echoed across the room. A spoon had fallen from the table of a nervous girl near the back.
Everyone froze. Hearts thumped. Soft beeps confirmed every spike, and the monitors on their chests glowed red.
Mara sat at the head of the table, hands folded, eyes sweeping over the room. No sweat. No tremor. A trainer's veil covered her face.
“Everyone breathe,” she said. Low, precise. “It’s just a spoon.”
The girl swallowed hard and reached for it with trembling fingers, her veil fluttering with each breath. Eyes darted above the fabric that covered nose to collarbone. Chests heaved beneath grey, shapeless clothing.
Incident Report // Fear Event — Sector 17 Hall
REF: S17-0823-001
Trigger
Metallic contact — spoon, floor surface. Accidental.
Response
Mass spike — estimated 14 monitors. All went red within 3 seconds.
Subject
Female, minor. Father: scavenging crew.
Contraband item — metal spoon recovered.
Emotion - Public display — laughter, embarrassment. Secondary violation.
Outcome
Subject removed for retraining. Parents: reprimand + potential isolation.
Contained by
Trainer Mara. Zero transformations. Meeting resumed.
The meeting had begun with routine. Reports. Minor disputes. Heart rates monitored. People sat in assigned pairs for mutual monitoring, mutual responsibility. No one worked alone. No one lived alone. Isolation bred fear, and fear bred death.
No one could speak about the last one who had activated too fast. The whispers had been enough for an enforcement response. Fear though illegal was always there, it lived in the margins; in the eyes visible above veils, the shaking of hands that weren’t meant to shake.
Someone in the back shifted, brushing another. The slightest contact.
• BEEP · RED
A hush fell. Even the older ones, survivors of the early outbreaks, paled.
Mara’s eyes flicked to the monitors. “Control,” she said. “Control is all you have. Lose it, and you lose everything.”
The room exhaled. Some quietly. Others barely. The fabric of their veils moved with each measured breath.
She knew what they didn’t.
Some of them would not make it to the next year. Some would wake in the middle of the night, hearts racing, and cross the threshold that no breathing exercise could reverse. They would transform, and the watchers on night shift would have to kill them before they killed others.
A loud bang from outside made half the room jump. A gate slammed in the wind. Monitors beeped red. Someone would be put into isolation for such a violation. Inciting fear, if bad enough, could lead to execution.
“Calm,” Mara repeated. Sharper now. People trusted her. Needed her.
“For the good of the community,” came from the hushed tones of those whose monitors had turned yellow. The mantra made to calm them and remind them what was at stake.
They had been taught since the world fell six years ago: faces lie, but monitors tell truth.
A soft sigh. A whisper of movement. And then Mara’s eyes tightened. She could feel it. The room had tilted. The balance had changed. The meeting continued, but she was no longer a mediator. She was a sentinel.
Because everyone in the room was one heartbeat away from disaster.
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