[PubQ] Song lyrics in manuscript - remove before querying?
Howdy!
So I am preparing my latest manuscript for querying and a kind beta reader reminded oblivious me that song lyrics can't be reproduced in print without a license. I used quite a few in the manuscript (totalling about 20 classic rock lyrics) as a big part of one character's development, but now I realize that if the book does get published that will be a huge headache (and expense) for the publisher to use them.
The story is better with them, but I worry that even having the lyrics in the manuscript at all creates yet another hurdle and just one more easy reason for an agent or editor to say no. So: Remove, or roll the dice?
Anyone with experience along these lines, would love your insights.
Thanks.