u/altterka

Image 1 — Capsule Art - Need help to decide and improve!
Image 2 — Capsule Art - Need help to decide and improve!
Image 3 — Capsule Art - Need help to decide and improve!
Image 4 — Capsule Art - Need help to decide and improve!
Image 5 — Capsule Art - Need help to decide and improve!

Capsule Art - Need help to decide and improve!

We received some critique on our capsule art:

  • The original was too busy.
  • The text and overall elements compete for attention.
  • The background character is too prominent.
  • The middle dividing line is distracting

The goal with revision:

  • Clarity, remove clutter.
  • Maintain style.
  • Eye following goal in order: 1. face - 2. text - 3. surrondings.

We made adjustments accordingly. Which version would you choose? Or would you change something else? Any opinions?

Steam Page

u/altterka — 3 days ago

We just launched the Steam page for our first indie Visual Novel game: For My Darling - Based on a True Story

Hi everyone. <3 (˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)

Big news! At least for us... well, probably just for us, but..... ANYWAY!

>For My Darling now has a Steam page!

https://store.steampowered.com/app/4599310/For_My_Darling/

˖𖥔 ݁. ⋆༺♱༻⋆. ⏾⋆

Short story: (edit)

"It's 2023. February 05. Lia is a 37-year-old woman, working in a multinational company. She lives with her boyfriend Victor, their relationship is filled with toxicity and pain. This day is different, she meets someone, who changes her life forever. She've never seen him before, however this doesn't mean... this is the first time this happened. Now it's 2025. December 25. she is different, he is different. Something is wrong, it shouldn't be this way! She needs to fix the mistakes of the past."

About:

It's a Psychological Horror Romance Visual Novel where Choices shape Perception and have Consequences.

You will Unlock Abilities and Lost Memories. Discover Secrets and New Realities while unraveling Lili's story.

It is 100% made within Ren'Py!

  • Based on a real-life story - Yeah, it really happened, and yes, everything is included in that statement.
  • Fully Voice-Acted  - To be implemented in the full release or a later version of the demo. ...give us time.
  • Different Endings \ Events based on your Choices - Every decision shapes the story. You are in control! ...right? 
  • Skill System - Skill system in a game about a true story? What...? ...yes. Don't worry, it's going to make sense.
  • Dating System - Just like in real life, you will meet people, and you may like them! ...well, that might be just fiction.
  • Unlockable Memories - It's about her life! ...at least what's left of it.
  • Unlockable Realities - Do whatever you can to deny this reality! ...you won't regret it.
  • Achievements - Because it is a game, it's fun to collect them! ...or necessary to fully understand her.
  • Secrets - Every detail is important, do not forget that! ...so cryptic.
  • New Game+ - For those who want to discover everything. ...maybe you don't have to.
  • Fully Animated Backgrounds and Cutscenes - You can turn them off, by the way. ...so many hours to create them.
  • Cinematic Experience - Just like a movie! ...but you can do so many things... so it's not really like a movie?
  • All Character Models created from the ground up - They look cool! ...kind of weird saying this about real people.
  • Hand-crafted stylised assets - So much red and black and stuff! ...emo is truly not dead!
  • Licensed Music - Ongoing collaboration with music artists such as Summer Hailstorm! ...man, amazing music!

It's been 1 year since we started development, and we can finally show some results. The demo is soon to be released, so stay tuned! We are searching for beta testers, voice actors. And of course anyone willing to give us feedback - that’s the most important!

- Aphyra Games

˖𖥔 ݁. ⋆༺♱༻⋆. ⏾⋆

u/altterka — 4 days ago

We just launched the Steam page for our first indie Visual Novel game: For My Darling - Based on a True Story

Hi everyone. <3 (˶˃ ᵕ ˂˶)

We’ve been quiet for a while… but not because nothing was happening.

>For My Darling now has a Steam page!

https://store.steampowered.com/app/4599310/For_My_Darling/

⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘⛧°.˖𖥔 ݁. ⋆༺♱༻⋆. ⏾⋆.˚°⛧⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘

It's a Psychological Horror Romance Visual Novel where Choices shape Perception and have Consequences.

You will Unlock Abilities and Lost Memories. Discover Secrets and New Realities while unraveling Lili's story.

It is 100% made within Ren'Py!

  • Based on a real-life story - Yeah, it really happened, and yes, everything is included in that statement.
  • Fully Voice-Acted  - To be implemented in the full release or a later version of the demo. ...give us time, Darling.
  • Different Endings \ Events based on your Choices - Every decision shapes the story. You are in control! ...right? 
  • Skill System - Skill system in a game about a true story? What...? ...yes. Don't worry, it's going to make sense.
  • Dating System - Just like in real life, you will meet people, and you may like them! ...well, that might be just fiction.
  • Unlockable Memories - It's about her life! ***...***at least what's left of it.
  • Unlockable Realities - Do whatever you can to deny this reality! ***...***you won't regret it.
  • Achievements - Because it is a game, it's fun to collect them! ...or necessary to fully understand her.
  • Secrets - Every detail is important, do not forget that! ...so cryptic.
  • New Game+ - For those who want to discover everything. ...maybe you don't have to.
  • Fully Animated Backgrounds and Cutscenes - You can turn them off, by the way. ...so many hours to create them.
  • Cinematic Experience - Just like a movie! ...but you can do so many things... so it's not really like a movie?
  • All Character Models created from the ground up - They look cool! ...kind of weird saying this about real people.
  • Hand-crafted stylised assets - So much red and black and stuff! ...emo is truly not dead!
  • Licensed Music - Ongoing collaboration with music artists such as Summer Hailstorm! ...man, amazing music!

It's been 1 year since we started development, and we can finally show some results. The demo is soon to be released, so stay tuned! We are searching for beta testers, voice actors. And of course anyone willing to give us feedback - that’s the most important!

- Aphyra Games

⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘⛧°.˖𖥔 ݁. ⋆༺♱༻⋆. ⏾⋆.˚°⛧⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘⫘

u/altterka — 7 days ago