u/_marear

I want to share another poem i wrote, please help me improve my writing. English is not my first language, so all advice are helpful.🙏

“It’s all been said and done

my tongue weighs like

a stone

no words can come out

through this empty mouth

‘cause meanings fall apart

when one speaks

from the heart”

we are all just loners

wandering through time

timing our pace

lost inside our minds

we are all just poets

drifting in disguises

dissolving into space

through hollow open eyes

we are all just sailors

cnd creatures of tides

chasing blissful hazes

as time passes us by