Feedback for the story/OC
Hai guysss✨
So i have this oc, she was one of my first ones, and i really like her design. I have a story for her, and she was actually created for the story i wanted to draw.
The story was supposed to be a romance, where she, is the main character. Has a birthmark on her face that covers half of it, orange hair and browhish skin color. She is the oldest among 7 children, around 19, and only has her father bc their mother died when giving birth to the youngest sibling. She is very kind, nice, hardworking, but often gets too overprotective, and controlling. She helps in her father's bakery, and really hates when she can't do smth perfectly on the first try. I would say she's the sunshine type. Oh and she has a little quirk; she loves to pick flowers and then dries them and saves.
In the story she was supposed to meet a writer of her favourite novels, and learn that he "lost his muse". She would help him through it, while he is staying in their small town, because he's recovering from some illness (or usut taking a break from all the things in his life that happened).
So yeah, that's the story summarised. I would really appreciate any kind of feedback on her design, story concept, etc. ✨✨✨
(excuse my spelling, English is not my native language so I'm not perfect at it)