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Con
Con
Seed
I plant
Bloom and sprawl
On the window frame
An inch
It creepper day
Seat
I took
Rush I may not
And look at the
u/Thought_Vomit_ — 18 hours ago
u/Thought_Vomit_
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Tuesday rain
Umbrella on a cloudless day
For aerial bombardment of the eye
Ricin pellets retaliated at a blank sky
The Innocent fall
With muscles
Spasmed
Strand
By
Strand
u/Thought_Vomit_ — 2 days ago
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Untitled
Sandals or sneakers I can't recall
I should’ve been embraced
By the warmth of my bed sheets
Yet the taxi engine breathes on me
Cicada beeps a summer tune
Twenty two
Frames blinked
Golden tears
Stream by stream
Down the iris of forest green
Five o
triple o
we continuously scend
To the highway
Whales deep in a fish tank
Nosedive to gasp an air
u/Thought_Vomit_ — 3 days ago
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Wave
Standing in the crossroad
A Pillar of ebony
Anchored down from the sky
Dozens and plenty more
Tendrils sprawling from its core
Tar black ooze vibrating on the veins
In unison
with tunes humming from the depths
Confronting the heart of Yggdrasil
Pesky ant like I
Can’t outrun unless I fly
Pockets empty no tricks to try
On the pavement
an unwanted stand-off
Fright fight flee freeze
Time to tactically fraternize
Back straight
Arm raise
Show my hand
An ambassador's move
Monoliths unroot and crawl to the sky
Slithery mirrors
Reciprocating a favor
All hell breaks loose as the serpent take a bow
The only thing left to do is
Thrust out my palm
Wave back
As hard as i can
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u/Thought_Vomit_ — 4 days ago
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Just another morning
Yawn, the coffee is salty today
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Just a fun one liner that I have come up with. My only question is should I keep it as dense as it is? or should I expand on this idea? Can you call something so short a poem? If yes, where is the line or criteria for us to define such a medium?
u/Thought_Vomit_ — 5 days ago