u/TheWalkingDeadFan112

Hi guys, I'm working on a script and I am about 40 pages in currently. You don't have to read the whole thing if you don't want to, feel free to if you would like. I really would like some feedback on where I am potentially going wrong and what I could maybe be doing to fix that. The current thing I am aware of is that I think I have pacing issues and need to work on that. But any other critiques are more than welcome :)

Edit: forgot to mention some things. It’s a feature screenplay, the title is “reunion” and it is a romance

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NTDS1-mobeCv_WZ-oQYYb-NVIZ_a1wIy/view?usp=sharing