u/TheMidnight_Architec

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The False Finish, Maybe...?

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​Seems to have began again.

Cloudy, gloomy, cognitive dim

(Am I grown—or just tired of the start?)

​Imagined the stars within reach of a pinch,

Conformity failure the unforgivable sin.

The forelock—lying, sinful forelock.

​Excited, started, decided—who cares?

3/4 of the way, maybe someday again.

Reminded, Rewinded, excited again,

The perpetual verdict: "He never has had have finished a thing."

​(Is it innate—or have I just learned to quit?)

Only, everything hits harder when its in the forefront;

The tactical blindness—Object permanence, the saving grace.

​Bought the house, laid with the spouse, societal norms.

Germination, procreation, raised these kids of my own.

Is that the paramount? Now have I grown?

​The one hard truth thats come to known;

Yes, everybody lies—save, I know where my fractures lie.

Is it only treatment to get by, day and day?

Or a cure found alone at the end of the days?

When the erasure stops, who is left behind?

Certain to die still at the starting line, will I never arrive?

When the erasure stops, who is left behind?

If eternity is the final place,

Will the resets continue to replay ?

​The end?

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​The Architect’s Note

​I wrote this in the space drifting between waking and sleep. It’s really an audit of own last 15 years. We’re taught that 'Maturity' is a destination—a house, a family, a career. But for the ADHD brain, those are often just biological and societal autopilots. Internally, the 'Rift' remains. I’m a 'Paramount' father on the outside, and a trade-school dropout on the inside. I’m questioning if the 'Reset' ever actually stops, or if we’re just 'Certain to die at the starting line.' This is the False Finish.

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