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The smoke breathing

The smoke breathing

I have made a guide to the smoke breathing used by Shometsu, so that you may understand better what happens during fights.

  1. First form, transience: this form is done by executing a quickdraw in reverse grip, done while advancing calmly. It is inspired by the momiji gasane.

  2. Second form, false memory: to use this form, you just be in the kasumi no kamae stance. Then, you must put your back hand onto the spine of the blade, then, as you start a thrust, use the hand to transition to a slash.

  3. Third form, ashen memory: this form is done by cutting three times in succession. I find both waki no kamae and jodan no kamae to be effective stances when starting this form, thought i find myself often choosing the latter. I suggest starting in the gedan or seigen no kamae, before moving to the before-mentioned stances, as it will allow you to parry and "riposte" an attack, leaving an opening for you to exploit.

  4. Fourth form, prince of lies: this form is the act or changing hands or grips during a flourish, attack or defense. I recommend using this form to change the direction "false memory" will come from.

  5. Fifth form, swirl: this is a defensive form, used to protect from horizontal attacks. You must block the opponent's attack with your blade's point towards the ground, then twist and slash back.

  6. Sixth form, broken memory: this form is the inversion of the second. It has two variations. To use the first variation, you must stand in the jodan no kamae stance: you would have to bring your blade down, as if slashing without moving it forward, then move it to the midi gedan no kamae (it is actually closer to the pflug stance of HEMA. More accurate description at the bottom) and thrust. The second variation is done by standing in the waki no kamae stance. You must bring the blade upwards, without moving it forward, then move to the kasumi no kamae, then thrust. This form has the benefit of defending the practitioner, as, when done correctly, the blade will protect you as it is being moved.

  7. Seventh form, sorrowful memory: to execute the seventh form, you must first rotate your upper body and feet. If this has been done correctly, you will find you have your back towards your opponent. Then, you must move your back foot in a sweeping motion towards your opponent's legs. Afterwards, you will swing your blade in an upwards motion. If this has been done correctly, your blade will naturally move to the waki no kamae position during the rotation.

At the current point in the story, Shometsu only made these. Those after will be created later

  1. Eight form, remember the bond: this form is done by swinging downwards the blade, just short of the opponent, before transitioning to an upward slash. Know that it can be used as parry against downward attacks.

  2. Ninth form, remember the light: this technique is done by executing the "veiled step" tecnique in succession. If done correctly, it will appear as if you continously appear and disappear from our world, as if diving and emerging from a cloud of smoke. (essentially, this is a series of feints)

  3. Tenth form, remember the dark: to perform this technique, you must first take the waki no kamae stance. Then, you must slash along a horizontal path and rotate in the same direction. While it is true that a single cut may work, i believe cutting thrice will prove to be more efficient.

  4. Eleventh form, distant figure: i execute this form by surrounding my body and blade in smoke, then sending masses towards one or more of my opponents, followed by a real slash from me. Of course, as you lack the ability to generate smoke, you cannot use this form. For this reason, i made a variation: a downward cut.

  5. Twelfth form, haitensei: this form is done by slashing around yourself as you run. I find it best used when surrounded by enemies, or to escape.

Final form, veiled step: this technique is the very core of the smoke breathing, from which all other forms originate. It is done by erasing oneself: intent and emotion both. Once that has been done, you must focus on moving at a high speed. These two factors combined make it so "the mind feels no need to keep track of you", according to someone i once knew. Beware, for the moment you think of causing harm, or that your focus slips, this tecnique will be undone.

Stances

The breath of smoke uses two stances as idle. The first is the gedan no kamae, the second is similar to the midi gedan no kamae. It is done by crouching, not much thought, and holding the katana close to your body and back. If done correctly, your handle should be positioned near your stomach, and your edge facing upwards. You should be positioned in such a way that your feet are aligned, as are your shoulders, with the opponent, in what some would call a "bladed" stance. It is inspired by one of the European kind, learned by fighting alongside one who used it...or was it against? (for those wondering, it's fairly similar to the "pfluge" stance in longsword, here's a video https://youtube.com/shorts/xqaJUpr5fqI?si=GCaTrCT2CTHkubXE)

I have tried to "RP" it as Shometsu explaining them to "justify" posting it in this sub, but i understand this may have made them less clear. Please, ask me anything you don't understand and i will do my best to help you.

I feel i must tell that all but the ninth and final forms are doable IRL, so any question on their execution i will be glad to answer.

I have also hid some hints at his backstory, if you can catch them.

I hope you enjoy, and as always: "may we meet again on the road ahead".

u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 1 day ago

OC breathing style

Hello.

I post to ask you all if you would like me to post a guide to my OC's breathing style, the smoke breathing, in order for you to better understand what happens when he fights.

Secondly, i wanted to ask if this would be the place to post it at.

Thank you for your time

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 3 days ago

Demon slayer, fractured memories, chapter 6, that fateful day

It was a calm night. A lone demon was wandering, aimlessly, through an isolated road. In his mind, only one thought: “how can i become stronger?”. He knew he needed strength to survive, to remember. But remember what? This was the sole question in Shometsu's mind. What did he wish to remember? His past, maybe, or the faces of his loved ones…or of those who wronged him? He sat on the side of the road, to reminisce of time long passed. He started remembering the one closest to him since he became a demon: Kajiro Tenka. It had happened only one month after his transformation. At the time, revenge was still his only concern. His blade had dulled, for he had fought numerous slayers, in hopes of killing the ones responsible for turning him into…this. That night, he saw two demons in the woods. One, the more human looking, was pointing and telling something to the other, who was standing on all four limbs and had a sharp tongue out, in an excited tone. Shometsu, despite his lack of interest in the pair, could still hear him speaking of “an old man” and “two small childs”. Regardless, he continued on his path. After some time, he entered a village. It was…empty, but the houses were not damaged in the slightest. He could sense it was the work of the two demons from before, but he didn't care. Then, he heard noise from behind him, and saw the pair running towards him…and past him. Before he could register what had just happened, he heard a scream from one of the houses. Then silence. His curiosity told him to go check, and so he did. When he got to the house, he saw the pair…and an old man with a blade in his shaking hands. He stood, as well as the fear let him, between the pair and two small kids.

Demon: come on, let down that sword and we will give you a quick, painless death, ok?

“coward”, Shometsu thought, seeing the scene, “a demon such as you should not fear a common blade”. Then, the old man noticed him

Kajiro: please, help

His was a request so desperate he couldn't even raise his voice. At the time, Shometsu would not have done anything. After all, what good could helping this man do to his quest? But the way that he protected his nephews, even in fear, even when facing certain death…it reminded him of someone who would have done the same for him, a long time ago. 

Shometsu: mist breathing, personal form, veiled step

Of the forms he had devoted his life to learning, this was the only one he remembered. He seemed to disappear from sight. The demons couldn't even see mist. There was no trace of him ever being there, nor of him leaving. Then, a blade pierced the humanoid demon’s neck, before slashing its way out. Shometsu had gotten behind the demon without leaving as much as a footprint on the ground. The demon's head fell to the ground

Demon: bu-

Before he could utter his last words, Shometsu's blade pierced him once again. His body turned into ashes that flew away in the wind. When he turned, Shometsu saw that the other demon had already fled in fear. He sheathed his blade and resumed walking away

Kajiro: wait! 

He turned to see that the old man had put down his blade

Kajiro: Is there something i can do for you, to thank you?

Shometsu looked down at the blade he had just sheathed. While it was true that it still served its function, its durability was low. He knew that if he didn't repair it, it would’ve had a short life.

Shometsu: point me towards a blacksmith, and your debt will be paid

Kajiro: Actually, i’m a blacksmith. Give that to me and it’s gonna be better than new

Shometsu: you are confident in your skill i see. Very well

As he went to give his blade to Kajiro, the sun began to raise above the horizon, as it did, its light hit his eyes, breaking him out of his trance. He looked around to see that same isolated road was now full of people of the most diverse of types. Merchants, farmers, wanderers and a few ronin. It appeared he sat through the night. He looked down at the blade in his sheath, a reminder of the bond he made 2 years ago. As he drew it, he noticed it had begun to dull. After all, he had fought two hashira, no katana can hope to be unscathed after crossing blades with such opponents, not even a nichirin.

Shometsu: i should ask Kajiro to repair it

And so he took out a notebook from his pocket, and wrote “20” under “owed to the blacksmith of Kawa-zoi tochi Kajiro”. Then he put it away, and resumed his travels.

Here ends this chapter of Shometsu’s journey. Thanks for reading this. May we meet again on the road ahead

Author’s notes and fun facts: I actually never planned to make a chapter on how they met, but then i realized that Kajiro, despite how important he is to why Shometsu is now not a mindless demon slayer-slayer, in my original plans had little to no “screen time”. If you like the idea, maybe i could make more of these “bonding chapters” in future, if anything to avoid him meeting an hashira every week. In addition, this is the last of the chapters i had already prepared. From now on i will only post each Saturday. Thanks for reading up to this point.

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 5 days ago

Demon slayer, fractured memories, chapter 5, high in the sky

It was a calm night. A lone demon was wandering through the woods, admiring the stars. Then, he stopped. In the plains just outside the woods, a group of demon slayers were fighting a demon. One caught his attention more than the others. She moved with grace, but every one of her strikes had a moment of hesitation. Soon, the demon fell, and his body dissolved into ash in the wind

Slayer: what should we do now, miss yoshi?

Tsubasa: check the nearby village, there could be other demons

Slayer: YOU HEARD IT, EVERYONE TO THE VILLAGE!

The slayer shouted the order to his companions. They began walking toward Shometsu. He resumed his wanderings, as he had no more interest in the slayers…then a voice called

Tsubasa: i’m sorry, can you please wait?

The voice spoke with sincerity, but he could sense a veil a suspicious in it

Slayer: Ms yoshi?

Tsubasa: Don't worry, you can continue, i’ll meet you there

Slayer: alright…

The slayers went ahead, looking back one last time before leaving the two alone

Shometsu: what is it that you need from me, slayer?

Tsubasa: a friend warned me who wore a fading black haori, had short black hair, deep red eyes and carried a nichirin blade of the mist breathing.

It was clear to Shometsu that she was talking about him. He began to consider his options. He could sense her strength to be on par with that of the fujin

Tsubasa: could you please turn around?

And so Shometsu turned to look at the hashira

Tsubasa: it is you

Shometsu: before you draw your blade, just know that whomever your friend might be, it is them who attacked first

Tsubasa: because you're a demon

Shometsu: that i cannot argue with, just know that i have never raised my blade unprompted

The tension was palpable. Both were ready to draw their blades at the slightest move…

Tsubasa: what's that behind you?

Her curiosity was genuine, Shometsu could feel it, and so he looked back to see…nothing

Shometsu: Are you trying to distract me, slayer?

Tsubasa: n-no! You had a dragon behind you, it looked like it was made of smoke

Her words once again sounded truthful, but he knew he would have known had his blood demon art been active…right?

Shometsu: i do not know what this dragon you saw was, but you can be certain it was not my doing

He looked at the horizon, the first rays of sunlight were beginning to shine trough

Shometsu: if it doesn't trouble you, i would like to resume my travels

Tsubasa: you’re a good demon, why don't you join the demon slayer corps?

He smirked, a rare occurrence

Shometsu: the reason lies within its name

Tsubasa: that doesn't matter, we have numerous demons within our ranks

This shocked Shometsu. Demons within the slayer corps…was it possible? He remembered the fujin’s hate, channeled against him without a reason other than him being a demon. How could demons be in the slayers, when people like the fujin stood at the top of their ranks?

Shometsu: still, i cannot join. I have taken human lives, no matter the reason, even self defense. That is a behavior unfit for a demon slayer

At those words, tsubasa’s face got serious

Tsubasa: that is something i cannot forgive

Tsubasa: avian breathing, first form, feathered wing cut

She dashes at Shometsu, drawing her blade and slashing at him.

Shometsu: smoke breathing, fifth form, swirl

His response is just as fast, drawing his blade and blocking the slash before turning and cutting simultaneously. Tsubasa then jumps back, avoiding the blow. They both returned to their stances. The stalemate was broken by Shometsu

Shometsu: second form, false memory

He quickly shortened the distance before feinting a thrust into a slash. But the slayer was too fast.

Tsubasa: fourth form, feather drift step

Like a feather in the wind, she gracefully moved out of the slash’s path before cutting at Shometsu herself. As he saw the blade approaching his neck, ready to sever it, he instinctively created a smokescreen, and used the opportunity to distance from the opponent. He stared into the smoke, readying for tsubasa’s attack.

Tsubasa: third form, wing flurry burst

She charged out of the smokescreen, and started delivering slash after slash towards Shometsu, who parried each blow. But he was no match for an hashira’s skill. Every parry, every block, put him more and more on the backfoot.

Tsubasa: seventh form, feathered sky piece

She suddenly changes strategy, thrusting at Shometsu as fast as a falcon’s dive. But Shometsu parried once more. This, however, was the last drop. All the minor errors he committed trying to defend against such a skilled opponent got to him. He stumbled. He fell to the ground. Of course, tsubasa wouldn't let this occasion go

Tsubasa: sixth form, soaring cresce-

Before she could finish, a ray of sunshine broke out of the clouds, and piercing through the foliage…hit Shometsu's skin. To no effect. She stood there, unmoving, her mind trying to comprehend how could a demon not perish in the sunlight. Taking advantage of her confusion, Shometsu kicked at her ankle, causing her to fall aswell.

Shometsu: veiled step

As she raised her gaze, she found no trace of the demon, as if he had vanished. She got up to search for him, but all she could find, hidden behind a tree, was an origami of a dragon.

Slayer: Ms Yoshi, we found another demon in the village and killed it. No one was wounded…ms yoshi? Is everything alright? Where did that man go?

Focused as she was, she didn't hear the slayers coming back from the village.

Tsubasa: don't worry. Let's quickly go back, i have to inform Oyakata-sama of something

At the same time, Shometsu escaped towards the village. He knew he couldn't continue running forever. If he wanted to recover his memories, he had to become stronger. He couldn't let anyone kill him before then.

Here ends this chapter of Shometsu’s journey. Thanks for reading this. May we meet again on the road ahead

Author’s notes and fun facts: this chapter featured the first of 3 user’s OCs, tsubasa yoshi by u/LongjumpingAd3320. I loved working with her and with tsubasa, i almost feel bad that the plot requires them to hate each other. May you live freely like a bird in the sky

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 6 days ago

Demon slayer, fractured memories, chapter 4, hana no megami, Uso no oji

Was it a calm night? We don’t know. It may have been, for the people of Asakusa, who were enjoying their lives, going happily through day after day, unaware of the evil hiding right beside them…but Shometsu was in shambles. He had awakened a blood demon art. Was he becoming…like them? Was he going to…crave flesh? The man from the memory flashed before his eyes, calming him down…even without knowing the reason. He entered an alley, butterflies made of smoke quietly floating beside him, as if with a will of their own. A loud sound broke him out of focus, and so the butterflies flew away, dispersing into thin air. He searched for the source of the noise, but saw nothing…then, he heard a “meow” behind him. When he turned, a cat was looking up to him. The cat carried a complex talisman on its collar, and had a piece of paper tied with a knot on his back. Shometsu, interessed, approached it. He saw the talisman, and tried to take it to inspect it, but the cat hissed at him and turned, drawing attention to the paper on its back. This time the cat let it be taken, and so, with the knot undone, Shometsu red: “follow”. Then, the cat began running away, followed by Shometsu. They chased each other for dozens of minutes…until the cat ran into a fence. Shometsu stopped, confused, and inspected the fence…before falling through it, as if nothing was there…on the other side, the cat was waiting for him…near a mansion. The other opened, and a man stepped out

Yushiro: come in

He said, leading Shometsu to the door. Though his words were welcoming, his glares betrayed annoyance. Once inside, the man led Shometsu to a closed door. He stopped and turned to look at him

Yushiro: if you lay a single finger on her, i will kill you

And opened the door before any answer could be given. Inside sat a woman, on the table laid a cup of tea. She looked up at Shometsu and smiled, before adding:

Tamayo: please sit, we have a lot to talk about

The demon did as asked, sitting on the other side of the table

Tamayo: i hope yushiro welcomed you well

Shometsu: his welcome was brash, but i could sense the reason was his fear i would harm you

At those words, the woman's look became serious, and she threw a glare at yushiro

Tamayo: i thought i told you to get along

At those words, he tensed up

Yushiro: you did…i was just worried is all!

She looked back at Shometsu, her look back to its usual calmness

Tamayo: We haven't introduced ourselves, sorry. My name is tamayo, and this is yushiro

Shometsu: i am called Shometsu

She smiled at him

Tamayo: we knew that, we monitored you for a long time, you see

Shometsu: why?

Tamayo: someone like you is rare…and because of this, we wanted to ask for you to aid us

Shometsu: in what way, and towards what objective?

Tamayo: we want to kill muzan kibutsuji, and for that we need to create a cure

This piqued Shometsu's interest

Shometsu: a cure to…

Tamayo: demons, yes. And for that i will need your blood. The circumstances of how you became a demon are special…i am sure that with your blood i would get closer to a cure. Please

She bowed down

Yushiro: L-lady tamayo!

Shometsu: get up, i am not one to bow to…i will help you

At those words, she got back up

Tamayo: thank you

Shometsu: but first, i need to ask you a question

He stopped, the words stopping in his throat. He gathered his courage, and finally asked:

Shometsu: will i crave flesh?

Tamayo: We cannot know for sure until i’ve examined your blood…but i think you won't. My theory is that is that some part of you is still human, and that is repressing your demon biology

Shometsu: i remember hearing of two demon slayers calling themselves “hybrids”, a married couple, is it what i am?

Tamayo: no, you are unmistakably a demon…i will be able to tell you more after careful examination

Shometsu: very well then, please take what you need

He rolled up his sleeves. She got up and opened a drawer, which contained a knife of sorts. She walked up to the demon and stabbed the tool in his arm…and it proceeded to fill with blood. She took a vial and put it in the drawer

Shometsu: fascinating…what is this you just used?

Tamayo: it's a tool i created, it draws blood from what it stabs

She looked at Shometsu

Tamayo: do you wish to stay with us?

At those words, yushiro looked shocked, and signed at Shometsu to decline

Shometsu: i fear i have a journey to continue

Tamayo: i see…then please, take this

She offered the tool for Shometsu to take

Tamayo: i’d like you to use it whenever chachamaru appears to you. He will have a vial with him, take it and fill it with your blood…if it doesn't bother you

Shometsu took it, proceeding to put it in his pocket

Shometsu: i will, thank you

He then got up

Shometsu: i believe it's time i continue my journey

Tamayo: of course, we don't want to keep you here against your will. Goodbye

The demon stopped and bowed to both, before adding

Shometsu: may we meet again on the road ahead

And walked away. As his figure disappeared into the night…

Yushiro: what was the deal with the smokey rabbits jumping behind him while he was here?

Tamayo: i…don't know...

Here ends this chapter of Shometsu’s journey. Thanks for reading this. May we meet again on the road ahead

Author’s notes and fun facts: sorry if this chapter is pretty long, i don't really have an excuse this time. Prepare, because next chapter is special. No spoilers!

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 7 days ago

Demon slayer, fractured memories, chapter 3, "the fujin"

It was a calm night. A lone demon was walking through a festival, his eyes filled with curiosity. He had seen such bright lights and heard such joyful laughs, a long time ago, he knew it, but he couldn't remember when. There were other people with him, but who? Regardless, he was happy. A horrid stench suddenly reached his nose. He looked for the source of this stench and saw a bento stand. “Of course, human food repels demons” he thought, and started looking for a solution. He couldn't destroy it, as it would've upset the people there…and ████. He saw a mask vendor. The masks were cheap, only 1000¥. He inspected them, then chose an oni mask, fit for a demon. Thanks to the mask, the stench was blocked, albeit only partially. But it was enough, and so he resumed his walk through the festival. A figure approached from behind, unfelt by even Shometsu’s senses. Then he struck, a dark green blade sliced through the air towards Shometsu’s neck…only to be stopped by the demon’s tsuka (the hilt of the katana), instinctively raised at the last moment. Before he could even process what had just happened, the man kicked him up in the air. He landed on a small, elevated hill, quickly followed by the man.

Sanemi: Still alive you piece of shit? 

His insults fell on deaf ears as Shometsu was still recovering from the kick, and thus not paying attention to him. Seizing the opportunity…

Sanemi: Wind breathing, second form, Claws purifying wind

…he raised his blade, dashing towards Shometsu with all his energy, before striking down, creating what appeared to be claws ready to tear apart the demon’s flesh. However just in the nick of time the latter drew his blade, blocking the slash. All effort was useless though as Sanemi rapidly hit him in the stomach with his knee, stunning the demon…

Sanemi: Sixth form, Black wind mountain mist

Sanemi slashed upwards, aiming to cut the demon in half, but Shometsu managed to recover just in time, avoiding the slash. Or so he thought. His left arm had been severed. Just before Sanemi could attack again he seemingly disappeared from view, reappearing behind the slayer.

Sanemi: demon…how many humans did you kill

The slayer asked without even turning to face his opponent

Shometsu: none

Responded the demon through the pain.

Sanemi: Don't you dare lie to me. WHO DID YOU STEAL THAT KATANA FROM

He finally turned, his blade pointing towards Shometsu’s, his rage stronger than before

Shometsu: This blade belongs to me, as it always had, i did not steal this from anyone

Sanemi: Fine, i don’t need to know whose it is to avenge their deaths

Shometsu: And i do not need your understanding to continue living

Sanemi: I’ll make your death as painful as i can

Shometsu: Smoke breathing, second form, false memory

He thrusted at Sanemi…before suddenly transitioning into a slash. The feint took the slayer by surprise, but his experience and skill let him block the slash nonetheless.

Sanemi: Third form, clear wind storm tree

He then slashed all around him, cutting everything caught in his fury, but is dodged by the demon

Sanemi: Fifth form, cold mountain wind

The slayer slashed upward, leaping into the air before slashing down at Shometsu, who parries both strikes. The demon, seizing the opening, thrusts, parried by Sanemi who uses the energy to slash downwards. Shometsu blocked the strike…

Shometsu: Forth form, prince of lies

…before letting his blade fall and promptly catching it, dashing at the slayer and simultaneously cutting. Sanemi’s skill shines through once more, as despite the unexpected move, he manages to block and dodge out of the way. Both fighters now stood out of the other’s range. 

Sanemi: First form, dust whirlwind cutter

Sanemi made the first move, cutting and advancing simultaneously, his strikes taking the form of a cyclone.

Shometsu: Fifth form, swirl

He advances towards the incoming opponent, not leaving him the space necessary to perform his technique, and blocks the strike, interrupting him before twisting and slashing. Sanemi dashed out the way, but too late, it was now Shometsu who dictated the flow of battle.

Shometsu: Third form, ashen memory

He quickly dashed at his opponent, before slashing thrice, but all were parried by Sanemi who took the opportunity to…

Sanemi: Fourth form, rising dust storm

He swung his blade with such force an ascending wind was made, but Shometsu was faster, and dashed out. They both stared at each other, analyzing the opponent…until…

Shometsu: Sixth form, broken memory

 He would dash at Sanemi, before raising his blade…and transitioning into a thrust. Sanemi however parried it and responded with…

Sanemi: Second form, claws purifying wind

He slashed down at the demon, who once again blocked, but Sanemi had a plan this time…

Sanemi: Ninth form, idaten typhoon

The slayer leapt over his opponent, who tried to turn, but to no avail. Sanemi’s blade cut Shometsu’s arm off. But as Sanemi lands, Shometsu used the momentum to land a kick to his face. Sanemi stumbled a few steps, before turning to his opponent, a crazed smile on his face. It was clear he was enjoying the fight, but…

Sanemi: I think it’s about time we finished this, don't you think?

And as he said that…he cut his own skin. Shometsu looked in confusion, not understanding why someone would injure themselves. Then the blood flowed out. 

He saw nothing. Felt nothing. Heard nothing. Around him, nothing but an infinite void. He did not know how much time passed, be it minutes, days, weeks, or a mere second. Then, his feet touched something. Solid ground. He looked around, but still all he could see was darkness. Suddently, he saw a light. With no other choice, he walked towards it. He felt…a sense of familiarity, but how could he? He had never been in this realm before. Lost in his thoughts, he continued to follow the light, until…he saw a figure with his back turned. He stopped. He wanted to go forward, but his legs wouldn’t move. He felt the need to scream, to speak, to make the figure turn and look at him…but no sound managed to escape his lips. Then the figure turned

Sora: Taiyo?

And everything was engulfed by the light.

He woke to the sight of the wind hashira standing on top of him, his blade raised and ready to cut his neck. He tried to escape, to grab his katana, but his arms and legs were cut. He could do nothing but witness the slayer’s blade coming down…then, a scream was heard. The slayer’s blood attracted many demons, who were now attacking the innocent civilians present at the festival. This distracted Sanemi. Shometsu released a mass of smoke, and with his regenerated legs, used this opportunity to escape. As the smoke dissipated, the slayer came to a realization, chasing the demon would mean letting the others devour the civilians. And so without the shadow of a doubt, he jumped down into the festival below.Shometsu, at the same time, was running away. His mind was filled with questions: “Who was that man?” “Why was he familiar?” “What did that slayer do?” But one question rose above the others. “What did i just do, and what power did i just use?”

Author’s notes and fun facts: Me and a friend met at my house to choreograph this fight. He learned the entirety of wind breathing, and then we fought (with foam swords). This fight is the result. All of this was checked to confirm who attacked, when and what forms were used made sense. Obviously we didn’t perform the idaten typhoon thought, for obvious reasons.

In case anyone needs it:

[https://kimetsu-no-yaiba.fandom.com/wiki/Wind\\\_Breathing\](https://kimetsu-no-yaiba.fandom.com/wiki/Wind\_Breathing)

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 9 days ago

Demon slayer, fractured memories, chapter 2, "in a nameless village"

It was a calm night. For a demon, that is. A demon named Shometsu was walking near a river, lost in his thoughts, wondering about…that man. He could hear his every cell scream. “i never met him” he thought “these must be the progenitor’s memories…it is possible that if he can see any demon’s thoughts…it might be true the opposite”. Then, he stopped. Were the screams getting louder? He looked south, the direction of the screams…and saw a village, covered in what appeared to be massive thorny vines. Interested, and with that man now forgotten, Shometsu started approaching the village. Inside the village, two demons were wreaking havoc. One, a man with hair of thorns and grey skin, was laughing while controlling his vines, making them search inside the houses of the villages, The other, a woman with the hair the color of blood and a fiery look in her eyes, was laying idly on the ground, examining a flower. 

Niwashi: come out puny humans! The GREAT NIWASHI orders you!

He continued to laugh hysterically as the moonlight shone on his eyes, showing the number engraved in them. Lower 4. The woman sighed, annoyed by her “colleague’s” laugh, as the flower in her hands burned into ashes

Haihana: Niwashi, can’t ya be less psychopathic and get us a human or two to eat? I’m starvin’ over here!

As the ashes flew away, carried by the wind, moonlight revealed the number 6 engraved in her eye

Niwashi: Shut it! The GREAT NIWASHI is having fun!

Haihana: Just get us some damn food…we have visitors

Shometsu: Smoke breathing, third form, ashen memory

Niwashi: A new prey for the GREAT NIWASHI! Whe- (note: the last two dialogues happen simultaneously)

He is interrupted by Shometsu, who rapidly draws his blade, cutting thrice in rapid succession the vines.

Niwashi: you’re a foolish slayer if you think you can harm the GRE-

Haihana: idiot, run while you still can

Niwashi: Why?

Shometsu’s blade answers, severing his arm in a fluid motion. The demon in shock quickly covered himself in vines and dug underground, leaving the village. Shometsu cleared his blade of the demon’s blood and put it back into the saya. Silence fell on the village. The screams had stopped…did it mean that…

Taiyo: Thanks for saving us samurai!

A gentle voice suddenly spoke from behind Shometsu, causing him to quickly turn. He was already beginning to draw his blade when…he saw a child? A woman came out running from one of the wrecked houses, only stopping when she saw the child standing in front of Shometsu.

Himawari: Taiyo! Get away from that monster!

Shometsu looked up as he heard the name be called, even knowing it was not his own

Taiyo: mom? Come say hi to mr samurai!

Shometsu: i am no samurai, young one, and your mother is right, you should not trust my kind

Taiyo: but you saved us!

The mother, who in the meantime had reached his son and pulled him away from Shometsu, looked at the latter confused 

Himawari: you…saved us? Did you kill that thing?

Shometsu: Be not mistaken, what saved you was not kindness but self defense, that demon tried to attack me with his vines. And no, he managed to dig underground before i could kill him, his companion escaped aswell

Himawari: will they come back?

Shometsu: likely

He then looked down at the ground. Vines sprouted from around him, before stabbing him with huge thorns. A laugh could be heard from behind

Niwashi: you pathetic slayer! You will pay for hurting the great niwashi, NOW SUFFER

Shometsu simply broke the thorns in response, his regenerating flesh visible under the holes now present in his haori. 

Shometsu: first form, transience

He calmly approached Niwashi, his steps making no sounds. The instant the opponent entered his range, he drew his blade in reverse, severing the demon’s head. The head fell to the ground, life having left the demon’s eyes immediately

Shometsu: one who can’t recognize his own kind is in no way fit to occupy a position in the twelve kizuki

The vines growing on the houses withered away and the houses, having lost what little was inadvertently keeping them stable, crumbled to the ground. Shometsu put his blade back into the saya and began walking away from the ruins. He suddenly stopped, and turned to look at the mother and her son

Shometsu: 5 Ri north from here there is a village named Kawa-zoi tochi, in it there is a swordsmith named Kajiro, tell him Shometsu sends you, he will help you. Goodbye

With it, he left the ruins of the village. “From here it’s their journey”, he thought as he continued his once again. A strong wind shook the nearby trees.

Here ends this chapter of Shometsu’s journey. Thanks for reading this, may we meet again on the road ahead

Author’s notes and fun facts: the main villain of the chapter is called Niwashi, this translates to “gardener” in Japanese. I'm sorry that i didn't post yesterday, i tought i did but our wifi was off

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 9 days ago

Demon slayer, fractured memories, chapter 1, the hinokami

Demon slayer, fractured memories. Chapter one "the hinokami"

It was a cold day. Atop a mountain a young boy was training alone, swinging at the air with all his might. The boy spoke to the wind, again and again, as if talking to spirits. He fell to the ground, gasping for air, having lost yet another battle to an invisible opponent. He sat there a long time, until he smelled something approaching. A demon. He stood up, grabbing a katana, his master’s blade. He faced the direction the scent was coming from, his grip tight and his determination unwavering, until:

Shometsu: let go of that blade, young one, before i draw mine.

Shometsu walked out of the tree’s shade, fully exposing his presence to the training demon slayer, Kamado Tanjiro

Tanjiro: What are you doing here?

despite the warning, his grip on the blade didn’t falter

Shometsu: i was simply passing by when i heard something, and that got my interest, i have no intent of killing you

Tanjiro could feel the sincerity in the demon’s voice, and so, even against his master’s teachings, he lowered his blade. After all, if his sister wasn’t evil maybe not all demons had bad intentions.

Shometsu: you chose the wiser option, i see, good…tell me, what is your name?

Tanjiro: Tanjiro kamado, how about you?

Shometsu: i do not recall my name, but a friend calls me Shometsu, so i have decided to go by that name

Shometsu looked around the area, admiring the view

Shometsu: If your goal is to become stronger, Kamado, i would suggest you change locations, that boulder may prove itself a nuisance

Tanjiro: The boulder? Actually i need to cut it

A rare confusion appears on Shometsu’s face, immediately replaced by his signature look of curiosity

Shometsu: why have such a strange goal? What reasoning led you to wanting to cut such…unique target?

Tanjiro: Mr urokodaki said that i have to cut the boulder in half to enter the final selection

Shometsu: strange…i never had any requirement to enter, but times change i suppose. Do you mind giving me a demonstration? 

Tanjiro: alright!

Tanjiro quickly ran up to the boulder. He raised his master’s blade and took a deep breath. In his mind, all the memories of the training he had to endure surfaced. He could do it, he had to do it. For his sister. His family. To protect the innocent from cruel demons. And then he struck. His blade came down and hit the boulder and…left not a scratch. The recoil made his arms ache and his body fall to the ground, it was clear he had yet to reach the power of a true demon slayer. He turned to face the demon, hoping for advice, but he saw no one. 

Tanjiro: Shometsu?

The boy’s voice was filled with confusion, did he imagine the encounter? No, he couldn’t have…then where…

???: That demon fled

A figure wearing a fox mask suddenly spoke from behind, startling Tanjiro

Tanjiro: Sabito! You scared me! Wait…did you say he escaped?

Sabito: Forget that coward and focus on the present, your training is far from over

Tanjiro: You’re right!

With one final look to where Shometsu stood, Tanjiro got back to training. Sabito was right, he had much to do.

At the same time, Shometsu stood by a tree, panting, for the moment he saw that boy bring down his blade an image flashed in his head. A long haired man with a bright red katana, wearing a pair of hanafuda earrings.

Shometsu: those weren’t my memories, were they? Whose memories…and why do i have them? And who was that man…he looked like that boy, but it wasn’t him…

Confused and frightened, Shometsu started walking away, his journey only getting started.

Here concludes this chapter of Shometsu's journey. Thanks to everyone who red it, may we meet again on the road ahead

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 11 days ago

Demkn slayer, fractured memories, chapter 0, beginning

Demon slayer, fractured memories. Chapter zero

It was a calm day. Three slayers had just slain a demon. It was a weak foe, thus none of them was injured. On the other side of town, a lone demon was waiting inside a shop, folding paper thoughtlessly. An old man came out of his forge, holding a katana wrapped in cloth. 

Kajiro: Here, your blade is ready.

the old man said, holding the finished work up for the demon to take. He places down his creation, a small, origami frog, and stands up, before taking the wrapped blade, unwrapping and unsheating it, exposing a blade of a light blue hue, a color unfit for a demon. 

Shometsu: As always, your work is admirable, how much do i owe you, Kajiro-san?

he says, admiring the weapon closely 

Kajiro: Nothing, as always.

Shometsu: I must insist.

Kajiro: And i insist that you owe me nothing.

Shometsu: Here, take these.

the demon replies, pulling from his pockets a handful of coins 

Kajiro: If you give me even a single yen, i will never touch your katana ever again, do you understand!?

The old man meant well, and they had this conversation many times before 

Kajiro: How many times do i have to tell you, Shometsu? I have a debt of gratitude, and so i won’t let you pay me, ever.

the old man sighed, Shometsu, while calm, was very stubborn at times. Footsteps could be heard outside. 

Shometsu: i was just passing by, it is nothing worth being grateful for.

he replied matter-of-factly, as if it was an obvious truth, known by all, while putting his nichirin katana back into the saya (the sheath). The footsteps grew closer. 

Kajiro: Fine!

 

replied Kajiro, eyeing the paper origami on the table 

Kajiro: Then i’ll take this as my payment.

this too had happened many times in the past

Shometsu: Very well, i hope your grandkids like it.

he then looked outside at the sun, which had just begun going down.

Shometsu: It’s time i go, Kajiro-san.

Kajiro: Alright then, see you next time, Shometsu.

With that said, Shometsu left the shop, bowing to the swordsmith he saved, Kajiro Tenka. The footsteps stopped. The sound of a blade being drawn rang through the air. 

The three slayers, coincidentally passing by, saw Shometsu and felt his demonic essence deep in their very bones. The first swung, to which Shometsu swiftly responded by blocking the blow with his saya and kicking him back a few feet

Lightning slayer: Lighting breathing, first form, thunderclap and flash!

the second darted through the air only to be stopped by yet another kick, followed by a stabbing motion with the tip of the saya towards the third slayer before he could draw. 

Shometsu: Smoke breathing, third form, ashe-

Kajiro: Stop!

Kajiro’s voice roared. Shometsu turned to see the swordsmith standing on the threshold of his shop 

Shometsu: Very well.

the demon replied, before bowing again 

Shometsu: Until next time.

Shometsu walked away in the nearing night, leaving the trio of slayers unconscious, but alive.

Kajiro: See you soon, Shometsu.

Here concludes the first chapter of Shometsu's journey. Thanks to everyone who red it, may we meet again on the road ahead

Author’s notes and fun facts: i hope you like it

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 12 days ago

This is a fic about my demon OC, Shometsu, a former mist breather who lost his memories after becoming a demon.

Now, he wanders japan in search of those same memories, meeting others such as hashira and other OCs.

I am an amateur, so the quality will not be on par as other fanfictions you will see on this sub, but i was told my fight scenes are well made.

If you're interested, i usually release one chapter every week on Saturday at 4pm (CET).

If you want other information, i will be happy to every question you may have, and as always:

May we meet again on the road ahead

-taiyo tekisetsuna

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u/Taiyo_Tekisetsuna — 16 days ago