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Take me with you,
Somewhere where you live.

Up in the sky,
 Where no one passes by.

I will Guard while you rest,
And make your bed afterward.

Come get me! Take me with you,
Somewhere where no one looks at me.

I will massage your legs,
I will serve you the food.

Just take me with you,
And let my shallow soul be Free.

~Rishab Jain

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Who wants that struggle,
If I could just get along with someone.

Why would I keep myself up late at night,
If I could just watch someone else doing it.

Why would I climb up,
If someone could carry me on their back.

Why would I think of “after”,
If someone else is thinking.

I can rest on my bed, while someone else
is working for himself.
I can eat those sweet berries then
Take a pile of cash and spend it on my
clothes, shoes and watch.

How nice it would be,
If I could just get along with someone.

But the sun seems rising from east again,
I guess it’s not today.

~Rishab Jain

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Who wants that struggle, If I could just get along with someone.

Why would I keep myself up late at night, If I could just watch someone else doing it.

Why would I climb up, If someone could carry me on their back.

Why would I think of “after”, If someone else is thinking.

I can rest on my bed, while someone else is working for himself. I can eat those sweet berries then Take a pile of cash and spend it on my clothes, shoes and watch.

How nice it would be, If I could just get along with someone.

But the sun seems rising from east again, I guess it’s not today.

~Rishab Jain

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Who wants that struggle,
If I could just get along with someone.

Why would I keep myself up late at night,
If I could just watch someone else doing it.

Why would I climb up,
If someone could carry me on their back.

Why would I think of “after”,
If someone else is thinking.

I can rest on my bed, while someone else
is working for himself.
I can eat those sweet berries then
Take a pile of cash and spend it on my
clothes, shoes and watch.

How nice it would be,
If I could just get along with someone.

But the sun seems rising from east again,
I guess it’s not today.

~Rishab Jain

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“You should study harder,
There is nothing without study”
I wondered why he would say that?

Is it because he didn’t complete his homework?
Because he was too busy playing cards and cricket?

Does he not find his life worth living now?

Does he not have enough money?
Or does he not have enough food to live on?

Why can’t he study now?
But it feels he got no other life,
He is stuck now.

~Rishab Jain

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I have made a new server on discord, it's about reviewing writings, like poem, prose, thoughts, paragraph etc. All sorts of writing, you can share your work there and people will give reviews about it. I want to create a humble community. Pls support. Here is the link of the server https://discord.gg/tq4TrQGcr

~Rishab Jain

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Who knows if it’s expensive or cheap.
It didn’t cost me anything.
I was always here
and might come here again.

It doesn’t have a meaning,
 at least not for me.
Nothing will change if my pen drops dead,
Sphere will still spin the same.

So why don’t I do what I want to?
It wouldn’t matter anyway.

But it remains the same-
“Why am I here?”

~Rishab Jain

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