GRAMMAR AND WRITING
How do I improve my grammar in GRE writing? I make a lot of mistakes related to grammar, so it does not help to get my target AWA score. I do proofread but I am unable to find mistakes.
For example , This is the writing sample written by me, which consists of a lot of mistakes.
Over the course of history, technological advancement has dramatically transformed the way individuals and societies function. This raises an important question whether the rapid increment of artificial intelligence is deleterious or advantageous to humanity. I mostly agree with the prompt for the following two reasons, though I do concede that rise of AI has helped people to learn new things in their life which can be beneficial for their careers.
First of all, artificial intelligence has caused risks to us humans because our jobs have been replaced by them. For example, one of the industry in Japan has superseded people by robots for the industrial work such as in the reception,service industry which previously performed by people.Not only this, tasks like coding, designing, editing which required skilled manpowers are replaced by generative chats such as ChatGPT and Claude AI.Human need employment for their security and run their daily life, if their work gets hampered by AI and bots, they will have a detrimental effect in their life facing difficulties to run day to day life.