u/RaineSlays17

Hi! This is my third year in speech and my second year doing creative expression. So I wrote my piece out and compared to last years, I just don't really know how it is. It's meant to be dramatic but it just feels weird. How could I improve this piece?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wJb5eneSrn3pgq10OFHkUi3a3G7P2qgKxySAZIzd6jQ/edit?usp=sharing

Hi! This is my third year in speech and my second year doing creative expression. So I wrote my piece out and compared to last years, I just don't really know how it is. It's meant to be dramatic but it just feels weird. How could I improve this piece?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wJb5eneSrn3pgq10OFHkUi3a3G7P2qgKxySAZIzd6jQ/edit?usp=sharing