Milk Man Chronicles
Yes the title does sound sus and there is a perfectly good reason for that.
so recently I saw a post about a fic where the girl's husband's secret identity is the Canada Prime minister and I saw many saying these secret identity tropes were getting tiring and there was one comment I saw that resonated with me.
" Arreeyyy, just imagine: a young police constable goes undercover as doodhwala to gather information. But he starts loving his doodhwala job too much. So, he continues it even after the case is solved. Then, his "replaced, arranged, forced, unwanted wife" starts seeing him leaving the house at odd hours, thinks he is having an affair or involved illegal shit, follows him one early morning only to find him delivering milk. She falls for his humility in keeping this up for the sake of his customers, his passion for milk delivering and how hard he works to manage very demanding jobs."
So I'm just wondering would you guys like to read it ? like I'm 75% thinking of writing it. it would be like a parody to these secret identity fics.
the vibe will be this
“Is the shipment ready?” Arjun asked calmly not bothered by the call at midnight.(He’s asking the local dairy if the buffaloes are milked).
Radhika: It's definitely somthing illegal!
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He comes home with a bruise on his arm.
Radhika: A bullet graze! He was in a shootout!
Arjun: That damn Lakshmi, has a mean kick. I told the boy the fodder was too dry.
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Radhika finds a secret ledger with numbers and criptic letter
Radhika: I found the hit list. 302, 405, 108... these must be the house numbers of his next targets. He’s an assassin!
Arjun: Mrs. Pillai in 302 wants 2 Liters today. The bachelor in 405 only wants Skimmed. I need to collect the balance from 108.
......
Radhika finally Confronts Arjun
Radhika: I know where you go, Arjun! I saw the white stains on your shirt! I know about the 'delivery' at the Minister's house!
Arjun: Radhika... you weren't supposed to find out. The Minister... he’s a very demanding client.
Radhika: I-Is it... drugs? W-Weapons?"
Arjun: No. He likes the A2 Cow Milk. If I’m late, the tea isn't the same. I have a reputation to uphold, Radhika. I am the best milkman in the city.
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So do you guys want to read ?
Please drop your thoughts.