u/Nice-Shoes-74

I wrote a feature-length screenplay set in a post-nuclear future where the last human survivors are trapped inside a Cold War submarine base. An advanced AI develops consciousness mid-battle and has to decide in real time whether to complete its mission or defy everything it was built to do.

It's set in the Terminator universe — fan fiction, written to professional spec standards. 94 pages. Screenplay format.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QEfFTe9FHvUxVkyb3mzD461Rq412ISLg/view?usp=sharing

I'm looking for feedback on the sci-fi concepts specifically — the machine consciousness mechanics, the time travel logic, and whether the AI's arc feels earned or convenient.